MLG vs. Heald. [Help's here. :o ]

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

You're up for it?

I'm thinking something along the lines of a three versus three. One out at a time.

I ban Toxic, that is all. Standard DQ.

The arena is the desert.

[Heald]

I accept your challenge. You send first, I attack first?

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Ok with me.

I'll be sending out Ise Nanao, my female shiny Meditite.

[Heald]

I'll use Chase, my female Espeon.

I'll post attacks soon, gotta go out now.

[Unbraced]

I'll ref if you guys don't mind a rookie ref.

[Heald]

That's fine, as long as you're active

Okay Chase, lets get this party started! Lets use the desert to our advantage and use Sand Attack to blind her! Next, use Calm Mind to boost your skills and finally hit home with a Psychic attack!

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Yeah, thanks for reffing Unbraced, but please let us know if you don't feel like reffing it anymore since I really want an active ref. My other matches, save from DL's, are unactive and it's pissing me off.

What? I'm not putting pressure on you. *diabolical grin*

Ok, Nanao-chan, use Substitute and protect yourself from that Sand-attack. Then use Dynamicpunch to mess with her mind while she's a sitting duck. Finish with a Poisonjab on her soft belly, try to aim right.

[Unbraced]

(okay guys. I'll be as active as much as I possibly can. I won't be able to work on it in school, but I should be able to update once every day.)

MeLoVeGhOsTs Vs. Heald!

Round 1 Begin!

PRE-BATTLE: Deep in an unknown desert, two trainers prepare for battle. One's a ghost lover, the other looks a bit like hitler. A ref appears, and the battle begins!

MLG sends out a Meditite, who twinkles upon being released.

Heald sends out an Espeon, who, while wicked cool, is not shiny.


Turn 1: Let's get it started! Chase starts out the match by kicking some sand at Nanao.(-3en) However, Nanao creates a lifeless hush of itself, one is unaffected by the sand.(N-11en-10hp)

Turn 2: Chase, quite steamed over her attack failing, calms herself and clears her mind of earthly concerns(-4en +1SpA,SpD) Nanao then appears and slams her with Dynamicpunch causing her to see stars . (N -7en C-6hp confused)

Turn 3: Dazed, Chase wobbles around. Nanao takes the chance and uses Poison Jab on it's belly.(N-5en C-7hp) However, Chase lashes a Psychic out, hitting... the Substitute. (C-7en, Substitute gone)

End of round!

Team MLG:




HP:90 En:76

Team Heald:



HP:87 En:86

Confused

MLG attacks next

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Calm mind, then Signalbeam, finish with Shadowball.

[Heald]

Okay Chase, make your own Substitute, then hit her with a Shadow Ball and then send her flying with a Psychic blast!

[Unbraced]

MeLoVeGhOsTs Vs. Heald!

Team MLG:




HP:90 En:76

Team Heald:



HP:87 En:86

Confused

Round 2 Begin!

Turn 1: Nanao begins the round by calms herself and clears ... I already did this didn't I? (-4en +1SpA,SpD) At the same time, Chase creates a lifeless hush of itself (-11en,-10hp)

Turn 2: Nanao uses it's newly powered up SpA to fire of a beam of...bug energy?, destroying chase's sub. (N-5en) Chase then trys to relate, but Suddenly orbs begin to spin around her head. She trys to bat them away, but ends up scratching herself. (-5hp)

Turn 3: Chase, really fed up with the whole confusion thing, shakes her head, and suddenly the ords go away. Just in time to take a ball of pure Shadow (C-15hp,N-9en) Chase then relates by blasting Psychic energy at Nanao.(N-10hp C-7en)

End of round!

Team MLG:




HP:80 En:58

Team Heald:



HP:60 En:68

Heald attacks next

sorry this took so long

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Unbraced, this doesn't really qualify as a good reffing. You should really fleshen out your reffings more, give some more detail, post the status of our pokemon before AND after the round.

You just say 'pokemon x attacks with x, pokemon y retaliates with attack y'. Look at the reffings in the reffing-tower and see how they do it. Or just look at other matches.

I want you to re-ref this in a good and fleshed out reffing. Don't do overdo it, but just make sure that it's decent to read.

[Unbraced]

Okay, edited

[DarkestLight]

Unbraced!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111!!11!eleve nty.

Now, don't get all nervous on me. Yer doing a good job, when it comes to reffing right now. The only qualm is the style element. You've broken up each set of attacks, which is what usually happens, but, as MLG said, there seems to be little substance to the reffing other than X hits Y...Y hits X.

Now, looking over round 2, you did add a bit more when you edited. Don't be afraid to use your imagination for every round hereafter. If you feel a bit confused or edgy still , then yes, definitely look at other matches, and read the flair that's in between the lines.

Some might get wordy...and some don't. If you feel you are that medium that works to garnish enough attention to the match as well as for the battlers to know how well they're faring, then by all means, stand by your reffing .

Basically, ref every round as if you were just a person wanting to read an exciting round of a reffing. Then you'll be fine

Only other thing, ya might wanna put the pre-round stats up before the round so the combatants know where they stood before the round started.

[Unbraced]

^thanks for the advice.

edited

[Heald]

Double Team ~ Shadow Ball ~ Psychic

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Swift those clones away, then use a Psychic attack to stop that Shadowball and send it right back at her. Finish with Signalbeam!

[Unbraced]

MeLoVeGhOsTs Vs. Heald!

Team MLG:




HP:80 En:58
+1 SpA and SpD
Team Heald:



HP:60 En:68
+1 SpA and SpD

Round 3 Begin!

Turn 1: Chase desides to kick things off by splitting into four clones(-8en) However, Nanao shoots stars at all four of them, destroying the clones and damaging the original.(N-11en,C-6hp)

Turn 2: Chase then trys to simply overpower Nanao by firering a ball of shadow at it(C-9en) But Nanao summons all it's Psychic powers to stop the ball and fling it back at Chase(N-15en, C-15hp)

Turn 3: Nanao then keeps up the attack with another beam of bug energy. Chase then uses it's own Psychic attack. The two attacks miss each other in midair, and hit there targeted foes(C-7en-11hp,N-5en-10hp)

Team MLG:




HP:70 En:27(someone tell me if I got the math wrong)
+1 SpA and SpD

Team Heald:



HP:28 En:44
+1 SpA and SpD

MLG attacks next

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

11En for Swift is a tad much methinks. Same for psychic, but since I had to bend an attack that makes perfect sense. Don't know if you thought about that, though.

Shadowball, Signalbeam, Shadowball.

[Heald]

Create a Light Screen in front of you to block those nasty attacks heading towards you. Retaliate by using two Shadow Balls to blast her.

[Unbraced]

(Sorry this took so long, and yes 11en for Swift is high but you were trying to hit four targets and yes, redirecting the attack was what made the en cost so high.)

MeLoVeGhOsTs Vs. Heald!

Team MLG:




HP:70 En:27
+1 SpA and SpD

Team Heald:



HP:28 En:44
+1 SpA and SpD

Round 4 Begin!

Turn 1: Chase, feeling rather naked,(fitting, since it is) puts a yellow box around itself.(-10en) Not imprested, Nanao throws another ball of shadow at it.(-9en) However, once the ball hits the box, only about half the attack gets thorough! (-8hp)

Turn 2: Chase takes a leaf out of Nanao's book and Hurls it's own ball of shadow (C-9en, N-15hp) Nanao changes tactics, going back to his beam of bug energy. (-5en) However, this doesn't work either, and only half the attack get though.(-6hp)

Turn 3: Both pokemon decide to screw originality, and both fire of a ball of shadow. (both-9en) However, the two attacks are fired at the same time, they hit in mid-air.

Team MLG:




HP:55 En:4
+1 SpA and SpD

Team Heald:



HP:13 En:16
Light Screen 2 more turns
+1 SpA and SpD

Heald attacks

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Bumping for my worthy opponent.

[Heald]

Psychic ~ Shadow Ball ~ Last Resort

If for some reason you can't use Last Resort, use Psychic.

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Use Bulletpunch + Megapunch and finish it. Relax afterwards.

[Unbraced]

Team MLG:




HP:55 En:4
+1 SpA and SpD

Team Heald:



HP:13 En:16
Light Screen 2 more turns
+1 SpA and SpD

Round 5! Begin!

Turn 1: Nanao tryes to end things as fast as possible by quickly punching Chase several times. (C-10hp N-7en -10hp) Chase bearly survives and uses it's final Psychic, passing though the light screen (C-7en, N-5hp)

Turn 2: Nanao fist glows as he lands the final blow (N-7en, 10hp C-faint)

Team MLG:




HP:30 En:0
+1 SpA and SpD

Team Heald:

None

(every time you attack with zero energy you lose 10 hp)

Heald relase and MLG attacks. (is that right?)

[Heald]

Actually I think I release and he attacks first.

Either way I release Megazord, my male Tropius.

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Icepunch x3.

[Heald]

Fly out of the reach of any punches, then conjure up a Whirlwind around her and send her flying up. Finally smash her with Air Slash.

[Unbraced]

Team MLG:




HP:30 En:0
+1 SpA and SpD

Team Heald:



100/100

Round 6! Begin!

Turn 1: Nanao welcomes the new opponent with an icey fist. (N-10hp) Megazord shows of it's wings and flies high to dodge (-9en)

Turn 2: Nanao tries the icey fist again, and it fails just as bad as last time. (N-10hp) Megazord's trainer tells it to whirlwind, but what goes up must come down as it crushes Nanao under it's weight (N-faint)

Team MLG:

None

Team Heald:



100/91

MLG release and Heald attacks.

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

I'm going to send out Isane Kotetsu, my female Swablu. Let's make this aerial.

[Heald]

Use Aerial Ace to strike her quickly, followed by a Headbutt to knock her down. Finish up by trapping her in a vicious Twister.

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

As soon at it approaches for Aerial Ace shoot an Icebeam at it. Then Sing and finish with Heat wave.

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Reminder for Unbraced.

[Unbraced]

keep you pants on MLG

Team MLG:



100/100

Team Heald:



100/91

Round 7! Begin!

Turn 1: Megazord welcomes the new opponent by slashing it with it's body (M-7en IK-6hp) however, IK uses this chance to hit it with ice at close range. (IK-9en M-17hp)

Turn 2: Megazord tries a similar tactic and runs to smash it's head against IK (-7en) Not wanting to take that hit, IK sings a sleepy song. (-4en) Megazord teeters out of IK's way, but stays awake.

Turn 3: Megazord whips up a mini tornado and flings it at IK (-8en) In an attempt to win the wind, IK blows some hot air at the tornado (-7en) However, the hot air mixes with the tornado and only makes it's impact stronger. (IK-16hp)

Team MLG:



78/81

Team Heald:



83/71

MLG attacks next

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Heatwave, Icebeam, Icebeam.

[Heald]

Protect against the Heatwave, then use Double Team to evade her Ice Beam. Finally hit her with Leech Seed to send her down.

[Unbraced]

Team MLG:



78/81

Team Heald:



83/71

Round 8! Begin!

Turn 1: IK starts things off with another wave of hot air (-7en) Megazord tries to save itself from the flame and crates a yellow circle that the flame bounces off of. (-11en)

Turn 2: IK swaps tactics and shoots out a beam of ice. (-9en) Not wanting to be hit by that ethier, Megazord splits into four, who become three.(-11en)

Turn 3: IK tries another beam of ice, but it does is destroy a clone (-9en) Megazord laughs, and shoots out some of it's seeds, that land in IK, draining it's health (IK-3hp M-5en +3hp)

Team MLG:



75/56

Leech Seed

Team Heald:



86/44

One clone

Heald attacks

[Heald]

Blind her with Flash then use Twister and then Steel Wing.

SUBS: Use Protect against Ice Beams and Twister against Heat Waves.

[MeLoVeGhOsTs]

Shut your eyes to repel the flash and sing. Then Aerial Ace twice.

[Unbraced]

Team MLG:



75/56

Leech Seed

Team Heald:



86/44

One clone

Turn 1: Megazord relesases a bright light From it's body (-7en) Ik tries to cancel the effect by closing it's eyes. Ik, if it was that easy, nobody would use it. The light burns IK's eyelids, and she forgets to sing

Turn 2: IK chirps something like "for my eyelids!" and speeds toward Megazord. (-7en) Megazord counters by hitting it with a twister. (M-8en IK-8hp)

Turn 3: IK tries to speed toward Megazord again, and this time pulls a two for one hitting Megazord and destorying a clone. (M-10hp IK-7en) Megazord relates with an iron wing to the face.(M-6en IK-7hp) leech seed takes effect. (IK-3hp M+3hp)

Team MLG:



57/42

Leech Seed

Team Heald:



76/21

MLG attacks