Whoa! Amazing! This has really high potential's, Gavin, and I loved reading it. The invader's movements, thoughts and actins were described beautifully (I hope it's not based from personal experience....), and you could really imagine yourself there.
One question...how did she know the 7 digit code?
It's also worrying she was killed! She's been watching too much 24...she thinks its too easy! Hehe. I wonder if the person who shot her actually wanted the Mythikian Jewels for themselves...
I'm sure this will unfold into another winner, Gavin! ... Does this mean LTL is drawing to a close?
-Chris