MI6: Black Surge

[dilmyster8]

Stuff needed to join:

Name:
Gender:
Skills:
Weak Points:
Suit description:
Weapon (some form of pistol, knife, or club):
Eye and hair color:
History(how'd they get into the agency, why, ect. ect.):

Info:
The time is 2011, The world is in turmoil and and an elite squadron is being formed to help put a stop to it. They will under go heavy training, then they will be sent out to the field to research a new criminal, Rein Clemp, A.K.A. Black Fist, disguised as cooks. we have reason to believe that Black Fist is making a toxic substance. We also have a reason to believe that he has stationed some minions in the White House to get to get a hold of a nuclear warhead to launch the substance world wide. We sent in a scout team 4 months ago and lost contact with them early last month. This is the last we heard. "We've been discovered! They have these weird weapons, they're like flame throwers without flames! It uses... GAH!" We heard choking, then this. "You made a big mistake sending in agents! You've unleashed my wrath!" Then we lost signal with it... Find out what happened to the scouts, see if Black Fist is making a chemical substance, if he is, arrest him and move out to the White House!

My stuff:
Name: Dil
Gender: Male
Skills: Hacking, aim, strategizing.
Weak Points: Heavy hitters, bombers, snipers.
Suit description: yellow over suit with black under suit and red bow tie.
Weapon: A custom 7 inch colt spray painted yellow with a 4 inch silencer cap. Uses custom 3 millimeter bullets designed to hit anything within a 10 yard distance with precise accuracy.
Eye and hair color: Blond hair, black eyes.
History: Growing up in the rich part of the neighborhood, Dil could get anything he wanted, but it never satisfied him. He wanted action, he wanted adventure. He was sick about having everything handed to him, so he left. The last things handed to him were his equipment, and a plane ticked. He left quaint quiet neighborhood in Florida, and headed for the MI6 base in England. He went with the scout team to Black Fist's base. Though not the most experienced spy on the team, he was one of the few who escaped. The agency thought the failure was his fault, and made him go back to the academy for training.

Rules:
Keep it PG-13
Swearing will be said as "bloody."

[Roy Karrde]

Hey! Welcome to the forums! Seriously we need a action RPG around here since its mostly... Fantasy.

Anyway I would suggest reading up on

This topic

You seriously have a great idea and a great start, and if you would like I would love to help you refine it. But yeah it looks like a great start!

[Master Rudy]

Let me be the second one to welcome you Dil. As Roy said it's a good concept but the idea does need some refinement. Looking over the topic he linked is a good first step to getting started in the RPG Forum. Here's a few more current and classic RPG's you can look over as well. These should give you an idea of how detailed some of the posts, plots and sign up forms should be ^_~

Dawn of the Blood Moon
Started-November 3rd, 2002
Completed-August 22nd, 2003

Blood and Magick II: The Forgotten
Started-December 8th, 2005
Ended-March 25th, 2007

Chronicles of the Rift II
Started-January 18th, 2007
Complete-September 13th, 2007

Kingdom Heartless
Started-July 7th, 2009
Last Post-October 11th, 2009

Dragon Ball: Spirit Unleashed
Started-January 12th, 2009
Last Post/Ended-August 24th, 2009 (currently in limbo.....either this is over or we're all just lazy :-/ )

Those should give you a general idea of what's been posted and how detailed people like to be. One thing to bear in mind as a GM is keeping things moving along and at a pace that hopefully keeps people intrested. Sadly however there are times where despite your best efforts people will just stop posting. Try not to let that discourage you if it does happen. Always remember that you could see anywhere from 5 to as many as 15+ RPG's that die off for every RPG that actually goes start to finish. The most important thing to remember in this forum is to not give up on an RPG and to have fun. If you get bored with one then try to leave it in a way that won't kill the RPG for everyone else.

Now I'm not sure how much experience you have role playing. As me and Roy said before it's a good idea but it does need some work. As a suggestion why not put that on the backburner for a week or two and try joining something with open sign ups to start? That way you'll hopefully get a feel for RPing here. It'll also help you get to know some of the regulars and their storytelling styles. In the meantime while you do that feel free to ask around and get suggestions on how to work on that idea. Nearly everyone on this board will be more than willing to help if you ask for it ^_~

EDIT-I almost forgot. In your own sign up you mention your weapon is a Colt. This can be pretty broad since Colt makes quite a few handguns. This is where being detailed comes in. Different people will think of different things if you simply say your using a Colt. If your going for a realistic and accurate feel as far as firearms go then be sure to drop me a PM. There are a few I've got personal experience with and I can easily look up others as well.