Hey ShinyMarill, aka Kecleon. Yeah I'm from the Serebii forums. As soon as I post my fic you'll know who i am. anyways, this is better than your first, i'd say. Though killing Granbull wasn't your best bit of writing. Is it just me or does a Pokemon die in each of your fics. In the original there was the leader's Murkrow, and now Chris' Granbull. Oh well.

A question for Krystal: If someone has askeed this already, oh well. If someone hasn't meh: What do you think of Dane now?