Interesting ending. The werewolf thing's a bit overdone IMO, but no matter. It was still done pretty well. The last line was kind of comical, as well. Karen's a little off her rocker, if you ask me...

I do think that Bruno's transformation and attack on Will could've been done a little bit better. It all seemed very technical, and a little fast as well. It was a good idea, yes, but I just think it could've been executed a tad better.

But this was good. You did a nice job with this fic, especially with the creative twists on the characters involved. The plot and description weren't half-bad, either. Good work.