Wild Side of Bruno *re-post*

[Iveechan]

There'll be gore later on... my favorite finished story. Watch as I cleverly bypass the censor!



WILD SIDE OF BRUNO

By Katelyn, aka Iveechan


Chapter 1: The Howling


The mighty iron-plated Steelix let out an earth shattering roar as it charged towards the nimble Hitmonchan. The boxer bounded to the serpent's side and swiftly ran along the segmented snake's body. Steelix spun its segments quickly, throwing Hitmonchan off his back. Hitmonchan landed skillfully on his feet, then bounced towards Steelix, his red gloves aflame. Steelix held still, and at the last moment, opened his cavernous maw and breathed out turquoise smoke...Dragon Breath. Hitmonchan leapt up in surprise. Steelix then swung the top part of his long body back and thrust downwards, attempting a Slam. He succeded in slamming Hitmonchan, but the clever fighter used Counter just in the nick of time, sending his towering opponent plummeting into the hard, rocky ground. The force of the megaton weight took its toll on Hitmonchan's light frame, and he staggered a bit. Surprisingly, the great Steelix rose up again from the dust cloud his Slam caused. His crimson eyes glared at Hitmonchan with intensity.

"Ok, boys, that's enough training for now!" Bruno called out. His two Pokemon, seeming to be rivals, congratulated eachother, Hitmonchan playfully patting Steelix on his side, and Steelix returning the favor with a toothy grin. Bruno suddenly grabbed Hitmonchan around the waist and gave him a noogie behind his crest. Hitmonchan slithered out of his trainer's grasp and tackled Bruno to the ground. He didn't like to admit it, but Hitmonchan was his favorite. He was Bruno's first Pokemon, found nearly dead and lost in the woods as a Tyrogue, and fourteen year old Bruno nursed him back to health. It was caring for and training Hitmonchan that fueled Bruno's passion for Fighting Pokemon. Over the years, another Tyrogue and a Machop joined his team, now a Hitmonlee and a Machamp respectively. The massive Steelix, once an equally intimidating Onix, was rescued by Bruno with the help of talented young Ash Ketchum and his friends three years prior. The most recent addition to the team (besides Onix's evolved form) was a young Hitmontop, not even a year old. Bruno thought it would be good to train him next.

As Bruno reached for Hitmontop's Pokeball on his belt, he felt a cold, uneasy chill sting at his spine. Bruno quivered... was there someone nearby? Bruno spun around. He saw a flash of grey and black fur disappear behind a boulder. Bruno took a step forward then stopped.

'I've never seen a Pokemon with that pelt before,' he thought. 'The only Pokemon I've seen in this area are Sandslash, Geodude, and the occasional Diglett.' Bruno could hear quick claws scrape on the rocks as the animal ran away. He quickly hopped on Steelix's head and ordered him to lift his head up. Steelix obeyed and raised his head. Bruno squinted at the mass of boulders and rock mounds. He caught site of a dark shape bounding amongst the jagged rock before disappearing behind a bend.

'So the creature is shaggy and four-legged. Too bad it was too fast for me to make out the shape. Still, I can't think of any Pokemon that even looks remotely like that.' Bruno sighed.

"Ok, Steelix, lower me down. Steelix? Hello?" Bruno waved his hand in front of Steelix's left eye. The snake didn't even blink. His beady eyes were fixated on the spot that Pokemon ran away from. He was completely frozen, paralyzed with fear.

Bruno shrugged and slid down Steelix's bumpy body. He turned to Hitmonchan and was shocked... the boxer was still as a statue, his staring eyes dry from lack of blinking, his ribcage trembling with each breath he took in. Like Steelix, he too was gazing at the spot where the mysterious Pokemon was spotted. Bruno had never seen this kind of behavior in his Pokemon, and he'd known his Hitmonchan for over fifteen years. Something told Bruno that training time was over and that he should go home. The vision of that mysterious Pokemon gnawed at Bruno's mind the whole way back... what the heck was it?

***

Will was meditating in the training gym, a pair of Pokeballs flowing around his head. His Xatu and Jynx were seated on either side of him, their eyes also closed in meditation. Despite being a psychic, Will didn't notice a dark shape approach him from behind. Suddenly, a weight slammed down on his shoulders, and Will jumped up screaming, nearly scaring the sh.it out of his Pokemon. He spun around and bared his teeth.

"You!"

"Yes me," Bruno chuckled as he ruffled the boy's hair. Will was only nineteen, the youngest Elite Four member. Bruno, being a veteran, frequently teased him. He even tricked Will into temporarily trading his Slowbro for Onix so the two could evolve into Slowking and Steelix... only Bruno's Onix evolved, for, unbeknowst to Will, it was Slowpoke that evolved into Slowking with a King's Rock, not Slowbro. Will was still angry about not having known better, but he blamed Bruno for his (Will's) own ignorance.

"Say, Will, have you seen a shaggy ash-colored Pokemon lately?"

"No, why?"

"Oh, that's right, you never go outside. Heh. Anyway, I was wondering if you could use your psychic powers to read the minds of the wild Pokemon in this area, maybe we can find out what it is."

"I've never heard of a Pokemon like that. Wait...this is a trick, isn't it?"

Bruno sighed. "Never mind. I'm going to bed, see ya later, ok?"

"Whatever."

"Oh, Will? You better watch where you step." Bruno laughed to himself as he exited the gym.

Will was confused for a second until he looked down and saw a big, moist glob of alabaster guano slumped dangerously close to his feet. Will shot a glance at his Xatu and saw the bird hiding his beak behind his wings in embarressment as Jynx pointed and laughed at him. Will scratched his head. 'I guess I did scare the sh.it out of my Pokemon.'

***

"Ah, sleep. My favorite time of day."

Bruno slumped into his cot, his thick chocolate hair still damp from his shower. The cold sheets felt refreshing against his skin, especially after a long day of training under the blazing sun. Bruno froze when his body rubbed against something soft and warm. There was something else in the bed with him. Bruno glanced at his pillow and smiled when he saw a mass of tangled silverish-lavender hair. He ran his fingers through the silky hair and its owner showed her face.

"Hey there, big boy," Karen greeted dreamily.

"Hello, Hoots." Hoots was Bruno's pet name for Karen because of her Hoothoot-like nocturnal nature. "I missed you today."

Karen rolled onto Bruno's chest, carressing his muscular pectorals. "That's why you should do your training at night like I do," she said.

"You're not staying all night?" Bruno questioned.

Karen shrugged. "No. But don't worry, I have time for a quick romp."

Suddenly, a long, eerie howl was heard from the outside. Karen gasped and shot up.

"Oh my god!" she shrieked. "Dark types!"

Karen shot towards the window and smashed her face into the glass, her nose becoming wide and flat like a Swinub's. Karen was a calm and collected person who always kept her cool, but when it came to Dark Pokemon, she transformed into a small child bouncing with excitement at the sight of a new toy. Bruno sighed as he joined his lover at the window. He put his arm around her waist and said, "Name 'em, hon."

"I can make out about five or six adult Houndoom, a dozen Houndour, and even a couple of puppies. They seemed to have made a large kill, and by the pitch of their yelps, I believe it is a Stantler or Rapidash. But...wait...huh?"

"What?"

"There's something else. Shhh."

As if on cue, the cries of the Houndoom and Houndour ceased and one bellowing howl took over. It was much deeper, much more frightening than the wild hounds' calls. It was eerie enough to make Karen shudder. It made Bruno uneasy that even the mistress of the night was scared of this howl. She stepped away from the window.

"I guess I should begin my training now," she said.

"Hoots, what about our...wait, I know that look. You want to go out and try to catch that Pokemon!"

"No I don't!" Karen protested. But Bruno could tell by Karen's growing smile that she really wanted to go add that Pokemon to her team.

"It's dangerous, I know it is. I don't want you to get hurt."

"I'll be fine. My Pokemon will protect me, and Umbreon and Vileplume won't get injured because the moonlight heals their wounds. Don't worry, I'm a big girl!" And without a second thought, Karen dashed out of the room, unable to contain her excitement.

"Be careful," Bruno whispered. The howl sounded again. People said that a Houndoom's howl could scare anything, but this new one was downright terrifying. With his concern for Karen and fear of that Pokemon, Bruno never knew how he managed to get to sleep that night.

[mistysakura]

Cool, that mysterious pokemon must really be something. I loved the interaction between Bruno and Karen, how Bruno understands her so well. (There IS no censor to bypass, btw.) And how's Guilty By Design going? Still on hiatus?

I'll keep reading this.

[mr_pikachu]

Interesting. I like Bruno's semi-playful nature; it makes him much more interesting than he was on the show. (I do think the reference to that episode may not have been a good idea, though. Very distracting.) So Bruno and Karen have a "thing" going, huh? Odd... I wouldn't have expected a Dark type trainer to like a Fighting trainer, for obvious reasons. But it does add some realism to the story. I've got a bad feeling about the coming morning, though.

I think the first bit could have been done a little better. The battle seemed a little too direct. It may be a good idea to try to add narration and other similar elements to that type of scene in the future, rather than just stating what happened. Also, if you feel a need to specify which person, Pokemon, or thing a verb is referring to, you should just rewrite the sentence. It doesn't look good when you add "(Will's)" into a narrative sentence.

Other than that, though, this was pretty good. I like the interesting and obscure storyline off the bat. It should be interesting to see where you go with this. Well, I'll see you next chapter!


P.S. When is GBD starting back up, anyway? I was just getting really interested in it... but take your time; I'll read it no matter how long it takes. Just make it good!

[Iveechan]

The link to the old thread of GBD (without most of the revisions) is still in my link. It's just small and un-noticable and simply says "hiatus". The paragraph above the link is what I wrote so far (with another small paragraph before that) but now I'm stuck on where to continue. Currently, 6 chapters are completed and it took me over a year to do that. Heh, I was getting the impression that GBD was unliked because I didn't get any replies after chapter 3 was re-posted.

The main reason why I paired Bruno with Karen is because I like the types that they train and the two felt the most interesting to me. But anyway, more will be posted later, I like to let my theads sit around for awhile before they are updated.

[Leon-IH]

Hehe, this is awesome I remember the old version and it ruled.

[Iveechan]

Wow... I was scared when I saw that you posted here because I know how negative you are. Cool.


Chapter 2: The Dog Came Back


Bruno awoke with a jolt. Sharp talons were scraping his face and a dark body was hovering over him. Bruno shot up in terror, his head bashing into the wall. He heard a high pitched screech and felt rough feathers flutter against this skin. He opened his eyes and laughed.

"Murkrow, what are you doing here?"

"Pretty bird!" The Murkrow replied. The dark bird belonged to Karen, and although Murkrow could learn to speak human language very well, Karen could only teach her to say "pretty bird" so far. Murkrow fluttered around the room, her shiny black plumage contrasting with the soft rays of the morning sun.

Bruno's smile faded when he realized something. "Murkrow, did something happen to Hoots?"

Murkrow only cackled and continued her raucous flying. Bruno leapt out of bed. "Show me where she is! Oh my god, if anything happened to her..."

Murkrow shouted "pretty bird" again before flapping out of the room. Bruno grabbed his Pokebelt and chased the bird.

A while later, they reached Karen's private quarters. Bruno was out of breath, more from his worry than from running. He breathed a sigh of relief when he saw the pale lady sitting calmly at the table eating eggs. Her Umbreon was curled up on an empty chair sleeping. Murkrow glided to Karen, perched on her shoulder, and pulled on her hair with her golden beak.

"Good morning Bruno... what happened to you?"

"I thought something bad happened to you! Your Murkrow came into my room flapping and carrying on and... say, did ever catch that Pokemon we heard last night?"

"See for yourself," Karen smiled.

Bruno could hear a grotesque smacking noise coming from under the table. He looked under and saw a large, hairy canine Pokemon with grey and black fur eating a plate of scrambled eggs. Its eyes were bright yellow and red, and its pointed ears were big and floppy. The beast slowly lifted its head up and a low growl rumbled in its throat when it saw Bruno. He backed away from it... it was that same pokemon he saw the other day!

"Hoots, what the heck is that thing?"

"Isn't she beautiful? She's a Mightyena. When I was a child back at the farm, there were Mightyena everywhere. I admired them for their mysterious and tough nature. Sadly, they frequently attacked Miltank and Mareep herds, so they were overhunted. I thought Mightyena were wiped out of Johto, but apparently they're not!"

The dog prowled from under the table and Karen knelt down and hugged her. Bruno cringed. Bits of egg clung to Mightyena's moist ebony lips and whiskars, her thick mane was dotted with specks of dander, and her large paws were caked with dried on mud leaving dusty paw prints on the clean floor. Being freshly caught, the beast still retained the looks of a wild animal.

"Aren't you afraid of catching something?" Bruno asked. "It sure looks filthy."

"Quarentine it," a third voice said. Bruno and Karen spun around and saw Lance, the dragon master and leader of the Elite Four, standing in the entryway of the kitchen. He had a youthful appearance despite being the second eldest member (Koga's the oldest). His long cape flowed elegantly around his lean frame. "Karen, you are sopposed to refer to me before any new Pokemon is added to your team. We need to isolate Mightyena and make sure it is free of disease."

"She," Karen growled. "Mightyena is female."

"Whatever," said Lance. "Give me Mightyena's Pokeball so I can send her to the Pokemon Center. You'll get her back tomorrow at the earliest if she's healthy."

Karen pouted as she took out the Ultra Ball she used to capture Mightyena. Bruno could swear he saw the dog shoot an evil glare at him before disappearing into her spherical container. What did Mightyena have against him anyway?



***

"Ok, Hitmontop, focus on Defense! And Machamp, don't hold back, use all of your power!"

Bruno was working with his youngest Pokemon and his strongest one. Steelix was napping under the shade of an overhanging rock while Hitmonchan and Hitmonlee were resting against his steel hide. Hitmontop was dodging Machamp's grapples and punches with ease, spinning like an insane dreidle. Machamp leapt up and stomped on the ground using his Earthquake attack. The fissure sent Hitmontop spinning through the air, making him look like a flying saucer from an old low-budget movie. Machamp swiftly snatched Hitmontop in midair and slammed the little fighter into the ground. Hitmontop covered his face as Machamp raised his three fists, his fourth holding Hitmontop down.

Something strange happened just then. Both Pokemon turned their heads and were staring out at Bruno's direction. Their pupils were shrunken and their bodies were locked in their current poses. Bruno realized the two were looking at the direction behind him. He spun around, heart racing, wildly looking at all the surrounding rock formations and boulders. Bruno then stopped. 'What am I doing?"

Bruno then heard quiet snickering. He turned to his fighters and saw Hitmontop nudging Machamp in the ribs, both of them laughing at their paranoid trainer. Even Hitmonchan, Hitmonlee, and Steelix joined in. Bruno fumed.

"Guys, that is NOT funny!" he scolded. Of course, Bruno deserved that morsel of humiliation... he fell for that trick two times already today, and his Pokemon never got tired of it.

Suddenly, Hitmonchan stopped laughing. He cocked his head as if doing a double take, then froze. All of the other Pokemon froze too. Bruno sighed.

"Ah jeez, do you guys really think I'm foolish enough to fall for that again, especially so soon after..."

WHUMP! Bruno found himself face down on the ground and felt rough paws scraping his back. He looked up. A Mightyena was standing on his back snarling menacingly. Like a bolt of brown and purple lightning, Hitmonchan pounced on the attacker and sent it flying into a rock. Steelix grabbed his trainer by the belt with his mouth while the two other Hitmon rushed at the canine. As Bruno dangled in the air like a kitten being held by its mother, the Hitmons surrounded the slightly dazed Mightyena. Bruno was shocked... it was Karen's Mightyena!

The fur on Mightyena's back bristled and she growled at her challengers. The Hitmon were shaking with fear but they tried to stand up to the wolf. Mightyena charged at Hitmonlee, fangs bared. Hitmonlee dodged and swiftly kicked her in the side. She yelped in pain as she hit the ground but soon rose again. The Hitmon trio circled her but didn't attack. It was like they were trying to intimidate her. This confused Bruno... Mightyena was a Dark-type Pokemon meaning she was weak to Fighting techniques... why don't the fighters just gang up on her and attack at once?

A deep growl of annoyance was heard, and Machamp charged past the Hitmon right into Mightyena. He turned to the three as if to say, "If you sissies won't take this mutt down, then I will!" Machamp held the dog down with the lower arms and raised his upper arms. Before he could pummel her, Mightyena snapped at one of his wrists. He flinched back before the fangs came into contact, releasing his captive in the process. Mightyena bounded to her feet, shook herself off, and glared at Bruno before taking off.

Steelix set his trainer down as the other Pokemon gathered around him. He collapsed to his knees "That was... that was really really ODD," Bruno said. He turned to Machamp. "Why did you flinch from Mightyena' bite? You get Crunched by Karen's Houndoom all the time, it doesn't bother you. Dark's weak to Fighting, remember?" Machamp just shrugged his two sets of shoulders and hung his head in shame. "Ah buddy, it's no biggie, it's cool! Put 'er there!" Bruno tried to high-five Machamp, but he just stood there with no response. All of Bruno's Pokemon had serious expressions and glanced at one another worriedly. It was like they knew something that he didn't.

***



"That can't be Karen's Mightyena. She was sent to quarentine in Indigo Village which is miles away, what would she be doing out here?"

"I dunno Will. But I swear it was her, I could tell."

Koga, the ninja Poison Pokemon trainer, snickered. "Fu fu fu... I like the sound of this Pokemon's stealthy nature. I wish I was the one who captured her."

"Yeah right," said Bruno. "If you did, you would never hear the end of it from Hoots...ugh, I mean Karen."

"Hoots?" Will and Koga questioned in unison. Will giggled. "What, is that like a Hooters reference or something?"

"No!" Bruno shouted. "It's, um. Sigh. Ok, that's what I call Karen. You know, like a Hoothoot."

Will squealed. "Bruno and Karen layin' in the bed, H-U-M-..."

"STOP IT!" Bruno shouted. "Atleast I have a girlfriend, Willy!"

"Don't get so defensive," said Koga. "You've been high-strung all day."

"Well you'd be high-strung too if you had an evil mutt stalking you," said Bruno. "I wish Karen didn't sleep during the day, I really want to talk to her."

"I know you want to do more than that," Will smirked. "I'm psychic, I can read minds."

"Psycho is more like it," Bruno said. "I'm going to my quarters, you guys are too immature for me."

Koga scoffed as Will continued his childish giggles, dirty images dancing in his youthful mind.

***



The door to Bruno's room cracked slightly. A stick poked through probing the air. Bruno slammed the door open the rest of the way, shouting, "AH HA! Thought you could sneak up on me, eh devil-dog?!"

He looked around the room. 'Good, no sign of that monster.' Bruno then noticed a lump under his covers. He smiled. Karen was waiting for him. She looked so beautiful too under the light of the full moon. Bruno thought it was funny the way she tried to be extra sneaky by hiding her head under the covers.

"Hey Hoots," he said. "Boy, what a crazy day I had today. Let me tell you all about it."

Bruno reached under the covers and stroked Karen's hair. He stopped. The hair felt thick and bristly. It didn't take long for him to realize this wasn't his lover waiting in bed with him. A rumbling growl confirmed his realization. So did a pair of glowing eyes. And a row of razor-sharp ivory teeth.

'It can't be...' was Bruno's last thought before the Mightyena mauled him...

[Leon-IH]

Yay, another section to a Fic that is not only intriguing but well paced instead of flying everywhere

By the way, was the negitive comment directed at me ?

[mistysakura]

Something's definitely up with that Mightyena, I think it's not jsut psycho, I think there's something behind it. Or else he could just have mad dog disease or something, judging by the reaction to the bite. Loved the bit where Bruno's pokemon were tricking him, and then it turned out to be real. Although a bit overdone, still humorous. So, if Bruno's getting mauled, that means he's going to die (unless the Mightyena's really weak, and I don't think so considering what hapopened to Machamp), which doesn't make sense since the fic's named after him!

Good stuff, keep going, don't abandon etc.

[Legends-Kuja]

I THINK I remember this fic...

Ah, fun little read. I'll be back when you make more. Wicked, those Mightyena are..

[mr_pikachu]

Odd... Bruno's Pokemon are scared of a Dark type? Something is definitely wrong here. There's obviously more to this Mightyena than meets the eye. And how exactly did it escape the quarantine? You're developing the plot quickly, and that can sometimes be a good thing. Just make sure you don't overdo the speed.

I think this could use a bit more editing, though. There were several spelling mistakes in this chapter, along with missing commas and punctuation. That sort of thing can break up the flow of an otherwise good chapter.

This was pretty good overall, though. Karen's certainly caught a strange Pokemon. It'll be interesting to see where this plot leads. I have a feeling this Mightyena's behavior has something to do with the title of this fic... anyway, good job, and I'll see you next chapter!

[Iveechan]

Fast pace is my style, get used to it. The hell of Les Miserables and my own impatience makes me favor quickness. That's why I rarely read those epic fanfics because I just don't have the drive to sit down and read 50 chapters.

I'm in a crappy mood now, so I'll post the last chapter in a few days or something.

[Iveechan]

WARNING: Most people tend to dislike the ending. And this chapter in general. I say poo on them. And don't bitch about the shortness.


Chapter Three: Puppy Love



"Damn. Damn damn damn."

Bruno's body stung as he washed his wounds off in the bath tub. He watched the pink mixture of blood and water swirl down the drain. The Mightyena's sharp fangs left massive gashes on his limbs and torso, and his face and body were covered with deep claw marks. He shivered. Atleast that dog was gone now. Bruno gave Mightyena a terrible pounding during the attack and, after leaving him a momento in the form of one more deadly chomp, she finally burst through the window and ran off. He was sure Karen would be mad at him later, but it was either him or the mutt.

'There. That should do.' Bruno turned on the faucet to get out the last of the washed-out blood, put on his blue trousers, then proceded to the sink for the first aid kit. The kit was actually a big, bulky duffle bag, for one gets injured frequently when he's a master of physical fighting. When he opened the bag however, the overwhelming medical scent made him sick to his stomach. Bruno never cared for that smell, but this was the first time it made him feel truly ill. He sat on the edge of the tub and put his head between his legs, the surefire way to relieving nausea.

It didn't work. Minutes passed and the upset in Bruno's stomach worsened. 'Shit, I did catch something from that filthy dog.' He heaved and clenched his teeth. He curled his arms across his belly and paused. Fuzz? Bruno didn't want to look down but he did. To his horror, there were patches of grey fur on his abdomen. Smoky fur also sprouted on his upper arms but his lower arms and hands were covered with black hair. Bruno didn't have long to wonder about his growing fur before he felt a hot, burning pain in his spine. He collapsed on the cold tiled floor in agony, arching his back. His fingernails, formed into sharp claws, dug into the floor leaving jagged scrapes. The fiery sensation was strongest at the base of his spine. When the pain ceased, Bruno glanced back. He was greeted by a bushy black tail formed from, logically, his tail bone.

'Aw shit.'

Suddenly, Bruno's jaws and legs ached terribly. He squeazed his eyes shut as his face started to protrude and form into a furry muzzle and his canines grew into sharp fangs. His sense of smell suddenly sharpened. The aroma of soap and the odor of ointment stung at his sensitive canine nose. His femurs began to deform and bend slightly, his feet elongated and the bones of his clawed toes curved, turning into paws complete with hard pads on the bottom.

Bruno opened his now yellow and red eyes. His eyesight was much worse, everything looked monochrome with only a few shades of color present, and the bright light of the bathroom irritated his oculars. But his hearing and sense of was smell heightened. Something piqued his interest. He perked his large, pointed ears and rotated them, searching for the source. A low, singing murmur was heard followed by the oily scent of human flesh. This smell excited Bruno and he suddenly had the urge to hunt.

"I'm on a quest for toothpaste

I must hurry, no time to waste

Brush my teeth, make them clean

Then I'm gonna leeeeeave."

Will didn't mind that the last line of his little diddy failed to rhyme perfectly. He decided to continue his fantasy tune with whistling. That reminded him of a real song, "Whistling in the Dark" by "They Might Be Giants." Will smiled as he lowered his voice several octaves.

"A woman came up to me and said, 'I'd like to poison your mind,

With wrong ideas that appeal to you, though I am not unkind.'"

WHAM!

The bathroom door crashed to the ground and shattered into several pieces. Will screamed. Prowling from the heap was a Mightyena. It was more than twice the size of Karen's, was wearing blue pants, had a big tuft of spikey black hair on its head, and human-like arms, torso, and lower jaw. It was Bruno. Will suddenly got a flashback of when he was five years old. He saw a man walking a Houndoom, and young Will toddled up to the dog eager to pet it. He was greeted by a stream of flame shooting from the irate canine's mouth. From that day forward, Will was in constant agony. He had to wear a crude mask to cover his badly burned face and one completely singed eye. Will learned to calm his mind through meditation to ease the pain, thus contributing to his strong ties to Psychic Pokemon. As Will's one exposed eye locked with Bruno's slit crimson ones, the young man felt the Houndoom's hellish fire burning his flesh.

Bruno bared his long fangs and charged at Will. He slammed the boy into the ground nearly shattering his spine. Will cringed as chunks of saliva from Bruno's snarling black lips splattered onto his face. The were-Mightyena felt Will's terrified heart pounding against his paws. Bruno suddenly lunged at his throat and swifty tore it open with powerful jaws. Will only let out a small squeak before the blood from his ripped jugular splashed into Bruno's face. Bruno pulled away and pinned his ears back. The coppery taste excited him again and he commenced tearing at the throat. After ripping that to ribbons, he started mauling his victim's soft belly, his claws tearing through the stomach wall, his teeth yanking out vital organs.

Bruno finally ceased his attack, panting. He sure did make a mess. He buried his snout in Will's torn-open body cavity and rubbed his nose in the sweet nectar, lapping up blood and gnawing at some now unidentifyable organ. His muzzle soaked with blood, Bruno lifted his head to the air and let out a low, bellowing howl.

***



"Gengar, you know what to do," Karen called.

The ghost Pokemon morphed into the shadows cast by the full moon. Houndoom searched frantically for her opponent. She was just about to use Faint Attack to search Gengar out when a deep canine's cry was heard. Houndoom and Gengar stopped what they were doing. The ghost disappeared into her trainer's shadow as Houndoom bristled the smooth fur on her back, snarling. A large dark quadroped shape came galloping across the land, fading and appearing again under the moon's shadows.

"Mightyena?" Karen questioned.

The creature reached Karen and stopped just a few inches from her. It then stood up on its hind legs, towering over the Dark trainer. As Houndoom backed away, Karen gasped.

"Bruno?"

Despite his Mightyena characteristics, Karen could recognize Bruno's spikey hair and large, muscular frame. She should know, she sees it every night, even if it was only for an hour. Karen smiled as she scratched behind Bruno's floppy ears. He closed his wolfen eyes and purred. Neither of them noticed Will's mask flutter from Bruno's snout to the ground.

"Well," Karen giggled as she rubbed her hands through Bruno's thick grey and black fur. "I guess this means we can train together, huh?"

END

[mr_pikachu]

Interesting ending. The werewolf thing's a bit overdone IMO, but no matter. It was still done pretty well. The last line was kind of comical, as well. Karen's a little off her rocker, if you ask me...

I do think that Bruno's transformation and attack on Will could've been done a little bit better. It all seemed very technical, and a little fast as well. It was a good idea, yes, but I just think it could've been executed a tad better.

But this was good. You did a nice job with this fic, especially with the creative twists on the characters involved. The plot and description weren't half-bad, either. Good work.

[Iveechan]

People keep saying stuff is overdone, but I don't see it THAT much. And I'm sorry that I couldn't please you with the attack and transformation, but that's just the way I write. If you can make it better, go ahead.

[Leon-IH]

Yay, similar ending to last time - infact I remember that last line and all I can say is three cheers for Iveechan!