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1st May 2003, 10:31 PM
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What Dreams Are Made Of
BWA HA HA HA HA!!!
ORGG LIKE FUNNY STORY!!! (You know what "Orgg" is, right...RIGHT?!)
Really, this is great! I love the scene with Pikachu, it looks like it was almost pulled out of a spongebob episode. Best of all, it looks like this story could easily be translated into a Manga form. (I happen to know a couple of good artists...)
My fic probably won't be as fast-paced as this one. My characters still have to establish themselves a little bit.
The way May (A character I know quite little about. Might you know a way that I can get some more info?) is portrayed is quite good, though I know next to nothing about her. She reminds me a bit of a character that will go into my story (Likes the main character, tries to seduce him, but fails with horrible consequences...only a more permanent one...)
Anyways, keep it up! (Give me some tips...PUH-LEEEZE!!!)
This story gets the official "Kohdok Stamp of Approval"!!! (Image coming soon...)
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