Interesting.

First, the mistakes:

You cannot switch a monster's battle position in the middle of the Battle Phase. Forte could not have attacked with Archfiend Soldier, moved Wall of Illusion to Attack Mode, and then attacked with Wall of Illusion.

Second, a battle between two monsters with zero attack results in neither being destroyed.

Anyway, it was a decent chapter. Kind of reminded me of Doppler from my original story. I hope you try to be a little more original with opponents in the future, though.

And by the way, no-one has ever pinpointed Domino's specific location - it can be anywhere in Japan you want it to be.