Alright, here I am. Sorry for the late reply, I've been busy.

It was a long story with many battles and scenes, so I'll write my comments as a list.

  • Hey, the training wasn't so bad!
  • I like your amusing writing style.
  • Nice way of wrapping things up by bringing up the details of your previour stories.
  • How did the Ditto use Nightmare while in Jeff's form?
  • How did you/Jeff survive for so long with no money? And if you did get some, wasn't there a phone booth available in the whole village?
  • Groviglio's perfecting himself! His insults are better when he's angry.
  • "Unlike what had been going on in previous months, however, they were not painting the scenery blue." <- That sentence made me laugh. I was thinking about that just before I read it.
  • So you're Jeff "Blue" Azure McCoy now?
  • I liked Mona's greeting. She should record it on an answering machine.
  • Nice description of the Jungle Deforestation Recovery Agency!
  • It's good to know Mona can get serious when necessary.
  • Does Kurtzwick have an internal radar for valuable objects?
  • The Lapras deserved to win that one. (Or should I say the Sea Monster?)
  • Interesting use of Haze. I guess being transparent has its advantages.
  • Yes, it's amazing what Metronome and similar moves can do.
  • I've just realized I don't know much about Mercandos. I'd like to see more of him.
  • Wow, Groviglio's found a rival!
  • I'd never thought of a connection between Pikachu and Makuhita before.


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