Thanks for the feedback Weasie! I can't help but overlooking the two 'damned' in one scentence? Could you tell me where they're located. Yeah, I like contradictions, even if it makes no sense. I just write gibberish- or random poems. Smiling, with not the slightest grin is something to ponder on.

Onto you WO:

I like the 'boxers' one a lot. I noticed that it's personal, but that's what makes it cool IMO. The center part is really awesome. It just seems - honest. Yeah.

The fandom-poem isn't really my style, so I won't voice an opinion on that.

And finally, the last two are pretty nifty according to me, especially Cherry. It just fits, all of it. Good job.

I should look into writing shorter poems. Gives you more things to think about. You inspired me.

Anyway, think I'll put another one up.


Morpheus with boobs

Each time the night closes her curtain, she knocks at my door.
Easily does she comfort me, placing my head on her lap.
She gently whispers truthfull cries, she reaches out and paints the room in her own color, until I tumble asleep.

I dream and throw around emotions from behind, I leave a trail, to mark the place, so that I never forget again.

Until the curtain falls, and morningglory's hand graps my neck, shocking me into reality.
And then, as daylight wins territory, I wish to fall back into my cave, that place where there is only thing I desire.
Oh I wish to hear those thoughtfull cries, all over again.

***

I wrote this when I was 16:

Just stay inside the cauliflower

They have no shame.
I do fear them.
Their eyes pierce my soul,
barb my eyes and sting my clear mind.
They come in great numbers.
Cannot hide, smell the foe.
Claws of sound, reach out.
They break my isolation,
do not fear, do not hear,
anything.

Nothing.


(Two cents if you guess what the subject of this poem is.)

Yeah, comments or feedback are/is always greatly appreciated.