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    Hey ShinyMarill, aka Kecleon. Yeah I'm from the Serebii forums. As soon as I post my fic you'll know who i am. anyways, this is better than your first, i'd say. Though killing Granbull wasn't your best bit of writing. Is it just me or does a Pokemon die in each of your fics. In the original there was the leader's Murkrow, and now Chris' Granbull. Oh well.

    A question for Krystal: If someone has askeed this already, oh well. If someone hasn't meh: What do you think of Dane now?

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    Mmmmmkay then. Oz Minds I'll have a look at the more recent episodes then. Aww poor Vinny was knocked out! But WTF Why did Sandra kill that man? She wanted a battle and so she was goign to get one from a man who claim he couldn't beat her... WTF....

    And why are people in a hostage situation not looking for an escape route and instead standing around talking about where they come from.. what is with these people!?

    And Poor old Granbull died eh I'm surprised Sandra just didn't kill those pesky kiddies....

    THe next chapter Chris has JUST LOST A POKEMON and a girl who watched it happen comes in and asks for a battle.. ok are your characters taking drugs!?

    Go Ekans but! Kick the butt of Eggy! Gogogogog Ekans' you're good!

    And WTF was with Krystal attacking that poor Taillow? Doesn't she like them after her league defeat? And ok let me get this straight...a girl goes alone in the dark at night to follow a bird with only a Seel she forgot... what drugs is she on?!

    Why did Chris not just stop and talk to the media? Interesting... I'm sure he'll be on a current affairs show and he "Attacked them brutally" And when you're depressed, why battle? That confuses me.

    And Krystal, she just had a Pokemon stolen.. so of course what you do is NOT report it to the police, or tell anyone, but go shopping... Why are these characters self imploding?

    Well its written well but 2 things bug me.

    1) The characters do the darndest things at the worst times ever and
    2) The battles seem to be padding :x

    But that's about all, I think having a lot of solo stories detracts from it as when they can bounce off eachother its a good thing, while the solo thing is good for 1 or 2 epis its not as interesting with that lack of character development in involvment cause you can't have an indepth conversation with Marril. lol.

    Good work Shiny, but watch those comments please.

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    Hanada: I kinda dont know WHAT to do with the whole Molly thang. I'll try to pull a little turn and make it all coolio and whatnot anywho, Her next battle is going to be (if i can manage it...theyre tedius to write) Chapter 31. Krystal, with Seviper? Well, she has gotten pretty picky with this whole Dragon Rock palava. We'll see, eh?

    Dragonfree: Girls are like that! well, some are :-o (remembers your a girl ^_^;, when she's on a shopping spree she can get overloaded with snazzy glittery clothes or something. My girlfriends that demanding, too....Smeargle and Wobbufet? Oooooh, maybe!

    The Silver Storm: People AND Pokemon die in my fics. Damien died in the first installment, that innocent bystander (Oz is right: WHY didn't he find an exit damnit!) was killed...although I AM working on the next proper, appreciated death. I dont think it was bad wriitng myself, and i dont think many people do here, either. Meh.
    Krystal: I dont know what to think, really. I still love him, and I think he still loves me. He said his job came first...but...oh, i dont know really.
    Chris: Date me...I wont leave ya
    Krystal: No. I'm going, cya
    Chris: WHAT do I have to do to get her to like me?
    Kecleon: Force her to marry you, have a shotgun wedding!
    Chris: did...did you just talk?
    Kecleon: Leon! Leon le!
    Chris: Oh...oh well...

    Oz: *sheilds himself from bitchiness* ARGH! Long! Well, let me sort a few things out for you:
    -Well, I used that whole 'Sandra-stupidly-does-something-stupid' thing to show she had power...but it seems a little hasty, doesnt it? Either way, it scared the other people to death!
    -'And why are people in a hostage situation not looking for an escape route?'
    I guess it must have been a damn great battle....*notices nobody laughs* Ok...ok, well, it was sealed of by those Rocket People, wasnt it! Some went upstairs, some stayed downstairs, some secured exits.
    -THe next chapter Chris has JUST LOST A POKEMON and a girl who watched it happen comes in and asks for a battle.. ok are your characters taking drugs!?
    It could cheer him up.........*silence*
    Actually, now I think abut it, he might become self-insaneincase anybody he battled pulled out a gun Now THERE'S an ironic twist...
    -Glad you like Ekans! Isnt he just cool....
    -You said yourself in FRTC - 'Will she have some anti-Taillow thing from now on?' I do so, i get shouted at! I cant win
    -Why did Chris not just stop and talk to the media?
    I myself, would hate being pestered by them, especially if my Pokemon (or in the real life, my adorable dog) had died.
    -And Krystal, she just had a Pokemon stolen.. so of course what you do is NOT report it to the police, or tell anyone, but go shopping... Why are these characters self imploding?
    She DOES tell the Police, i just didnt write it. Ch21 for more details. She told the Police, who are going to ring her when Dane is caught. Soon? maybe.......

    and besides, the solo stories are being tied up a lot more. There are:
    1) Chris & Krystal in Kanto
    2) Megan's last mission
    3) Molly's Johto League battles
    4) Rika defending her title
    5) Tony's life in Cerulean
    6) Al, although he doesnt appear much!

    Now, at Chapter 30, we have:
    1) this is here till the end!
    2), drawing to a close
    3) Hmm...i may write this in advance, and have it postable whenever
    5) Starting to draw to a close
    6) Meh, its shooting back up and becoming more important, but will soon go for certain reasons.

    Its a big collection of stories, but most are slipping away. I hope you're just in a bitchy mood, cos you seem really harsh! :-o

    anway, now the bitchy sesh is over, its back to writing for me! I might add Chapter 29 is 7 pages of CHRIS all the way! Nobody else.

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    Wow, that was a great chapter. You had great deatial and it was a great length. Right now your story is my favorite. I can not wait for the next chapter!

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    Completely forgot about Damien, I almost wish that Scizor had saved him, just so he and Dane could kill each other.
    Muahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!! Ohb well, I'm not going to name my fic or anything, just to create suspense.


    A question for Chris: when are you going to avenge Granbull?

    Question for all the main characters: are any of you applying to go to a mental institution? /jk

    actually I wanted to ask what are your plans for when Chris and Krystal get back from Kanto?

    For Krystal: When are you going to start believeing what Chris says?

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    Totodile: i'm very pleased! your favourite? I carry that with pride! I hope you enjoy the next Chapter!

    The Silver Storm:

    Chris: I'm not sure if avenging him will help...will it? True, Sandra deserves to be punished, but what can I do? Maybe next time I see her i'll get angry...

    Al: Give her one from me...

    Chris: Erm...sure, why not! How are things?

    Al: I'm being tortured to being told about the whereabouts of a key...*SCREAM* ARRRRRRRRGHHHHHH!...erm...yourself?

    Chris: well, that in mind, I can't complain really. Hey...did you say something about a key?

    Al: It doesn't matter, really. *cough*





    After Kanto? well, this is the last you'll see of Chris and Krystal, as i havent made plans for another fanfic with them in. You'll see everything come together at the end, i guess.

    Anyway, here is Chapter 21! I'm still writing Chapter 30: expect it to be titled the same as the preveiw but the main Chris focus slightly diferent. Seel has a much-needed perspective after the Tales of Trechery, and the Megan saga comes to a close with an unexpected twist...

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    The Indigo Road
    Chapter 21 - Reunion, Scooters, Escapes and Smoochers
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    Krystal

    We walked on through the woods until it started to become lighter. At the moment, I was listening to ‘Girls Aloud: No good advice’. It wasn’t really my style, as It was terribly poppy, but it was an Ok song really.

    I don’t need no good advice,
    I’m already wasted,
    ” I said, as the song was pumped to my ears. Flaaffy and Marill walked alongside me until a city came into view.

    It was Celadon, as a large overhead banner read ‘Welcome to the fresh sights of Celadon!’ with a Gym badge either side of the words. That must be the official badge, which ‘Joe trainer’ would want to compete for.

    And then, as I walked through the gates, I saw something up ahead. It was Kimi! And Espeon! I ran forward with Marill and Flaaffy, as Kimi looked up. She faced me with open arms, only to see me hug Espeon very tightly.

    “How ARE you?” I asked my friend. She was a really strong Pokemon I owned before I tried training for Dragon Rock, so I handed her over to Kimi. She was beautiful, her lovely silky skin, her soft ears, her delicate tail…

    “Nice to see you, too” Kimi rasped. I got up, and stared into her eyes, while Flaaffy was introduced to Espeon.

    “And HELLO little Marill!” Kimi cried, wrenching Marill from my grip. She smooched her on the cheek and hugged her tightly. “HOW ARE YOU?”

    She reminded me of a butch auntie of mine, Auntie Gladys. Well, it was actually Kimi’s aunt as well…you get the picture! Kimi then spied Flaaffy.

    “AWW! A FLAAFFY!” She cried, grabbing Flaaffy and hugging her tightly, just managing to lift her off the ground. Flaaffy squirmed as Kimi planted a kiss on her left horn. I just WISHED Flaaffy had released a thunderbolt!

    “Kimi” I began, thinking over the past few days. “I gotta tell you a few things first”

    *

    Megan

    “We’ll be fine, don’t worry” I re-assured Mightyena. He sat by my side as we sat in the hull of the boat. It’s destination: Saffron City, but we had to get to Vermillion Port first and drive to Saffron.

    Mightyena grumbled as I scratched behind his ear. He seemed a very loyal companion, and I was still very grateful for Jet giving me one of his Pokemon. Now, Jet had only Foretress, and I had Mightyena. I thought back to Pyro Island, and how I abandoned the chance of getting my Pokemon back from the Pawn Shop.

    I heard a noise. The clunk of metal steps as somebody walked down them got ever louder, and the noise soon echoed around the room I was in. Boxes were piled high, and rags and clothes were scattered around.

    I glanced at Mightyena, before the two of us ran across the space and squatting behind the stacked boxes. I looked across the wall at the shadows as the figure began to move.

    “Oh, Mightyena” Jet sighed. It was Jet! He came down and walked around the hull. “Why did I leave you? Why?”

    Mightyena began to pine. No. Not here. I felt awful for hiding from Jet, but Jet felt awful leaving me behind. “I’ll need a dark type if I’ll be taking Saffron Gym”

    This time it was me who blundered. I fell over in shock and landed on the cold metal floor. Jet wandered over to me, Mightyena happy to finally see his master again. Jet was tackled to the ground by the friendly Pokemon.

    “Hey there” Jet said, as Mightyena licked his face. “Megan? What’s going on?”
    “We…we wanted to come with you,” I said, looking down at the ground. “I figured that the only way to get back on my feet is to get back into the knack of things”

    “James didn’t plan on keeping you” Jet told me. My brow was furrowed. “He actually hoped you’d just…well…die. That’s why I have been seeing you so much, to make sure you’re ok”

    “Oh” I mumbled. “Thanks for telling me, but what can I do after this?”
    “I don’t know” Jet began. “If only you could just reset your career…”

    I stared into Jet’s eyes as he thought. I had an idea. I perfect plan.
    “I need you to help me with something” I began. I then looked around slightly. “But we’ll make a start after the mission here”

    *

    Krystal

    I had gone back to Kimi’s flat and met Brock, before the three of us wandered through Celadon with our Pokemon. I left Charizard and Steelix in the reserve outside Kimi’s flat, but Flaaffy and Marill came with me, Kimi, Torchic, Brock and Lotad. We stopped off at a Diner.

    While eating my steak and chips, I looked at Kimi’s Torchic. It was cute, and seemed to be talking to Marill a lot. Marill was a very social member of my team, unlike Charizard and Kingdra. Flaaffy got quite nervous around new people, but he was doing very well.

    Brock’s Lotad was asleep as Brock ate his chicken pie. Brock poked it happily and chuckled as it snored. We had got onto the topic of Team Rocket, as it was a hot focus point for paparazzi and reporters. Kimi had shown me numerous headings from Celadon City newspapers of the explosion a few days ago.

    “So, did you tell the Police about Seel?” Kimi inquired keenly.
    “Well…sorta” I began. “The man asked what Dane looked like, and I told him, but they said they’d ring me with any information.”

    I ended up crying. It’s weird, because Seel never really seemed an overall favourite on my team. I suppose I plucked him from the wild and sorta just kept him in a ball, but confined as he may be, I hoped he was safe now. Maybe he was taken to Seaworld? I could free him…hehe…

    “I can’t believe he worked for team Rocket!” I wept.

    “They’re called the Organization” Kimi said, eating her watercress salad. “Run by James Holmes”
    “Cool” I replied. “I hope Chris is alright at the moment”
    “He should be fine” Brock said happily. “He’s had experience on his own before, hasn’t he?”

    “Probably” I muttered. I slurped my strawberry Milkshake and finished it off, before Kimi started looking around nervously. She stared at me, then Marill, then my belt, and then at Torchic.

    “What’s wrong?” I asked Kimi. She looked nervous still.
    “I know you’ve been a bit troubled recently” She began. “But can we have a battle? A 1-1”

    I thought about this. Her Pokemon would probably look good, if she was a breeder, but we’d have to see. I could train Charizard, Steelix and Marill up before we headed off.

    “Maybe later” I began. “There’s more to this fanfic than battles”
    “Fan…fic?” Kimi questioned. Stupid girl.

    *

    Chris

    It was nighttime. I stood infront of Granbull as his corpse was riddled with flames. There were about 12 of us altogether; some were other members of Lavender town who paid tributes, but a lot were challaners; people who could talk to the spirits. They gathered with their ghost Pokemon as Granbull became cremated.

    I sobbed to myself, as a young woman put her arm around me. Granbull looked peaceful, which was best. All my Pokemon were out their Pokeballs, and I noticed Umbreon and Electabuzz were very emotional, as well as Kecleon, but Pidgeotto seemed very unsocial and tried to look at something else. Bulbasaur, however, just stared at the ground.

    I was so alone. I needed somebody I knew to comfort me. The flames skipped along Granbull’s body; he was on a sort of pedestal, only it was about the size of a table. It was marble, and Granbull lay on it, burning slowly. The fire danced and hissed all over my Pokemon.

    Kecleon was a plum purple, emphasising his sadness. I then thought about God. How can he watch down at me now? How can he feel anything but sadness? How can he do this to me? I have been living hell these past few days, and I don’t think anybody realises that.

    *

    The next day, I wandered through the quaint town of Lavender. It wasn’t busy really, a few people wandered here and there, but all in all, it was a relief from the hurly-burly of Saffron.

    Kecleon at my side, we approached a girl who I saw at the cremation last night. She had dark hair down to her hips, and had piercing blue eyes. She wore sensible glasses that were silver, and looked pretty. She was about my age.

    “I’m very sorry about your Granbull,” She said slinkily. What do you mean? Slinkily’s a word! You know, it means sorta seductively and slyly…duh!

    “It’s Ok,” I said lightly. She smiled.
    “I’m Monica,” She told me. “Fancy a quick battle then? You know, to help boost your spirits and everything…”

    “Maybe not” I said to her. “I just feel a little down…and I don’t think it would boost my spirits”
    “Well, maybe you can have lunch with me” She said, once again being slinky and sly. I wanted to decline…

    “Erm…” I mumbled. She kissed me on the cheek.
    “How about now?” She said to me seductively.
    “Of course!” I cried, walking up the road with her.

    We had a light lunch at Mcronalds, before walking through the small shops to buy some new things. I had a little wad of cash, which meant I could probably buy a small mode of transport to get back to Celadon. I’d heard good things about Golf Buggies; maybe I could purchase one of them.

    “Let’s see” I began, getting out my bankbook. “£275: that could get me a rather shoddy buggy with no wheels”

    “Yea” Monica replied. “I suppose I’ll come with you then”
    The two of us got our bags and wandered off through the town once more. We approached an electronics store, which sold all sorts of gadgets.

    “Let’s see what I can buy!” I cried happily. However, after looking around for quite some time, I found nothing. I wandered over to an assistant.
    “Excuse me, where are the electric buggies?” I asked.

    “Sorry, those things are only to be used for golf” The man said. “Some Australian guy introduced the buggy system a while back, and trainers have been stealing the idea ever since”

    I sighed. Lucky Australian.

    “What can I buy?” I asked.
    “Have a look over here ” The man told me, leading Monica and myself through the store.

    I stared at the item the man showed me. On a showcase pedestal, it revolved slowly as a spotlight shone onto it. Monica seemed to like it. I was unsure.

    “A petrol scooter?” I asked him. “How much?”
    “£274.99” The man said happily. I had the money, and it would be a nice way of getting around…

    “Deal!” I cried, getting out my cash card.

    *

    Krystal

    “Go, Charizard!” I roared, throwing the Pokeball out. It burst open and formed into my faithful Charizard. Happy at being released, he blasted torrents of flames from his mouth.

    “I choose Furret!” Kimi cried, releasing the friend ball. It opened and took the shape of a slinky ferret Pokemon, which bounced happily. Kimi squealed with delight as Furret started sniffing the air ‘adorably’.

    “Flamethrower! Now!” I shouted. Charizard opened his mouth and blasted a stream of flames at Furret. Furret glowed, before using an agility to shoot out of the way of the attack. Charizard tried again, but Furret evaded again.

    “Use a tackle!” Kimi shouted. People who used tackle were either complete idiots, or really good people who practised and revised basic attacks. I knew which one she was…

    Furret built up speed and raced at Charizard. He then swung his leg around, smacking Furret in the jaw and sending her flying back to Kimi. She grazed herself across the side. Charizard then flapped his wings and took into the sky.

    “Thunderbolt!” Kimi ordered. That attack surprised me a lot. Furret blasted a thunderbolt forward at Charizard, and my dragon Pokemon was caught up in the intense blast. He was shocked so hard he lost flight, causing him to hit the ground.

    “Charizard! Get up and use a seismic toss!” I shouted. Charizard swooped forward and grabbed the squirming Furret, carrying him like a parcel as he tore through the air. As he got very high, Charizard threw Furret down effortlessly. Furret was hurtling down towards the ground very quickly, spelling a bad result for Kimi.

    “You know what to do!” Kimi cried. Furret started to balance out, and made sure she would land on her feet. Furret then bounced lightly as she hit the ground, flying through the air and landing safely.

    “Take down!” Kimi said. Furret built up speed (which seemed really easy for her) and raced at Charizard. Charizard watched, unsure of this, before being hit in the stomach by the charging fluff ball.

    Charizard was winded, and toppled back. Furret ran back to Kimi happily, as Charizard started to get up. I was angry, as Kimi was just having a laugh, effortlessly attacking us, while I took this seriously.

    “Flamethrower!” I shouted. Furret charged at Charizard, but my faithful Charizard was ready. He opened his mouth and blasted a searing streak of flames forward at Furret. Furret leapt to the left and evaded the fire, and then across to the right to evade a 2nd time.

    “FIRE SPIN!” I roared loudly, spit flying from my mouth. “GO!”
    Charizard flapped into the air slightly, as Furret ran close, before he blasted a spiral of flames straight at the Ferret Pokemon. Hurt, it leapt back as flames shot across its body.

    “Furret!” The Pokemon screamed. It collapsed on the ground, rolling to put out the fire. Kimi looked rather worried. The arena was ground and soil, so Furret’s flames were put out easily.

    “You poor thing” Kimi said, bending down. She got out her Pokeball and recalled Furret. “Thanks for the battle”

    “Anytime” I remarked, as Charizard landed beside me. “Want another bout?”
    “No! That’s alright,” Kimi said quickly. Torchic on her shoulder, she walked ahead through town. Brock walked with me, as I recalled Charizard and picked up Marill. I’d settled the score, and taught her a thing or two!

    “Was that really necessary?” Brock asked.
    “Well, Yes” I said back. “I want to show her that I’m no bubble-headed girl: I haul ***!”

    “Don’t do it again, Kimi can be stroppy” Brock warned me. Oh well.

    *

    Tony

    My eyes opened, and I stared across the room. The table was smashed and in pieces, and the bookcases had been tipped over. The books were ripped, trashed, burned

    “Misty” I hissed, getting her attention. She stared across at me, wearing a somewhat bleak grin. “We need to get out of here”
    She nodded, before looking ahead and screaming loudly. I looked to see what was wrong.

    Mudkip and Ekans had been hung on the wall across from us, their necks slit. Blood had seeped out, dried and cracked over their gashes, and their faces were lifeless and their bodies limp. I screamed out, too, but nobody could hear.

    “My god!” I cried. “My Pokemon!”
    “Don’t worry” Misty said. “I still have Staryu”
    “But you said…” I began.

    “I HAD to say that, I thought someone might have been listening,” She told me. “The Pokeballs on my hair band, but its well concealed”
    “Great” I said. “Release it and we can escape”

    Misty shook her head violently (she was restrained with chains, as was I), and her hair band fell from her hair. It clattered from the ground, the Pokeball opening and taking the shape of Misty’s Staryu.

    “Hya!” It cried.
    “Staryu, use a swift!” Misty shouted. Staryu blasted an array of tiny yellow stars from its central core, the stars gradually weakening the chain restraints. With a rapid spin, Staryu managed to smash the chains and get Misty down. Misty then helped free me.

    I sobbed as we walked past Mudkip and Ekans…I wasn’t too fond of Ekans, but Mudkip was for Brittany! What would I tell her? I can’t tell her that Mudkip’s dead…

    We ran towards the room, but the door was locked. It was steel, and very hard. Misty banged it in frustration.
    “Stupid door!” She snapped, tugging on the handle. “Dave must have locked it”

    “Look!” I cried. “A velux window!”
    “It’s locked, like the door!” Misty pined.
    “But it’s glass” I stated. “Staryu can break it!”

    “It’s not a brick!” Misty bellowed. I stared at her. She stared back at me. Seconds passed gracefully, before she realised what we had to do to escape. “Ok then. Staryu! Rapid spin!”

    Staryu shot through the air and smashed the glass, sending it showering onto the floor. Misty and I stood back dramatically as Staryu dropped back down. Misty then watched - interested in how we were going to get out, as the velux was rather high.

    “Don’t worry,” I said. “We can use those bookcases”
    We used Staryu again to use its psychic powers, lifting the bookcase to the wall by the velux. I then started clambering up the case, before reaching out for the window edge. I grabbed it, but managed to pierce my skin with sharp glass. Cursing, I hauled myself up and looked at my wound. It was small.

    Misty followed me from down in the room, and as she got up, we looked around to see where we were. We were on top of what seemed like a bunker, a bunker that overlooked a vast forest. I could see a town ahead…was it Cerulean?

    “This is hopeless” Misty pined. “If Dave isn’t here, he’ll have left for Cerulean now, to take over the Gym!”
    “Shhh!” I hissed. I pointed to the ground, and Dave was seen getting the keys for his car. Misty and Dave knew how to drive; I had failed my test twice.

    “Double edge!” Misty cried. Staryu flew forward and smacked Dave in the jaw. Dave fell back onto the ground, blood gushing from his face, mostly his nose. Staryu had blood over one segment, but Misty jumped from the semi-underground Bunker and wiped the blood off.

    “I have an idea,” I said, as I grabbed the keys from Dave’s unconscious body. I shook them infront of Misty. “But you’d better drive…I can’t”
    Misty smiled, before recalling Staryu. She took the keys, and as we piled into the car, I looked in the back seat, admiring the sleek leather chairs.

    “Wartortle!” I shouted, seeing my friend gagged and tied in the back. “We must be remotely close to Cerulean if Wartortle is here!”
    I untied and ungagged Wartortle. With him alongside, Misty put her foot down on the clutch, before speeding off through the forest, Dave, Mudkip and Ekans far behind us.























    Next Chapter, posted on Monday the 19th of May! 'The Serpent, The Viper, The Dragonfly'

    -Rika's match against Tom continues. Can she work her way through Tom's Pro-freeze plan?
    Gyrados powered up an ice beam, before issuing the attack from his mouth and across the arena. Now, as Jolteon evaded the attack, the whole arena was a solid layer of ice, waiting to be challenged on. As he powered the beam, Gyrados rose out the water (sorta flew…hovered in a way) and made sure to glaze every spot.
    “Jolteon!” I cried. “Get ready!”
    “No need” Thomas said, recalling Gyrados. “We’re done for this stage. I choose you!”


    -Chris and Monica go apple-picking in Lavender Orchard. It's a lovely peaceful day...but what's that in the bushes?
    “Great!” Monica said. “Let’s get it healed later on, and we’ll get it verified by the Nurse”
    After we ate our ‘victory’ ‘meal’, we got our bags and walked through the town to the Pokemoncenter. I didn’t know quite what this was, but it better be a lot more social than Pidgeotto and Bulbasaur…


    -Krystal does a little 'training' after getting lost in the woods, but was her battle all that the Pokemon needed toe volve?
    As I wandered back along the path, Vibrava lay there. It twitched a little more, before it was taken over by a bright white glow. The glow shrouded its body, and caused it to change and form into a much larger, much fiercer dragon. The new Pokemon looked around with its huge red eyes, experiencing this new feeling of freedom with its much broader wings.

    As it flapped, it shot into the air and through the forest. A large gust of wind whipped up behind it, and it tore off towards Celadon, seeking revenge.


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    I'm still here, I've been away for a while but now I caught up completely!! This fic is sooo good, you really make me happy shinymarill!! Anyway, poor granbull(I really loved that part, its so sad but it was really eeehhm beautiful), question for cris though, How do you want us to remember granbull?(how we should remember him how he was, you were his trainer so you should know him good) and a question for bulbasaur, don't you wanna be a strong pokemon? cuz you aren't really battle willing.

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    Oakbark:
    Strange......i thought Dane would kill Skarmory for his comments......

    Anyway, I can't help feeling Chris' new catch is a Baltoy- you know the one that evolves into the big fat thing with eyes all around its head.
    So, Flygon's in town- but will Krystal have what it takes to catch it????????

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    Shadow: Hey again, long time no see. Granbull's death was striking, wasn't it? I liked writing it.

    Chris: He was...a fighter. A non stop plugger. He was very strong physically, he was the bodyguard in my team.

    Kecleon: what part am I?

    Bulbasaur: you'd be the dickhead

    Kecleon: Screw you, weedy! *Unleashes psybeam*

    Chris: Hey, stop that! *recalls both*. Like I say, Granbull was a fighter. Remember that.

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    Bulbasaur: I'm naturally strong, my species evolve with the seasons. I dotn need 'levelled up' or 'trained', i'm already like level 46 or something. I'll probably evolve if 'ASH' lets me out...I dont want to battle with him that much, but...but I know i'll have to eventually.



    Charizard: You guys might not hear from me often, but i'll say Pidgeotto's take on Chris changes a lot in Chapter 28, you'll see. Hehe. Why? You'll see. hehe.





    Oakbark: Baltoy? I HATE THEM! they remind me of Jewish Stroodles, which i think tell your fortune. But just because I hate it, does that mean it wont be in? Do you not like him?

    Yea, Flygon's in town. Krystal...catching it? Well, it makes perfect sense, and i do really love Flygon! You'll have to see on Monday ^__^;;, what did you think of the scooter?

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    MY NAME IS THE SILVER STORM!!!!!!!! NOT SKARMORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also who said i was a guy???????????

    Krystal, you didn't answer my last question: When are you going to start believing Chris

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    I loved that chapter. Monica gets on my nerves, I'm not sure why... I can't believe Dave killed poor Mudkip and Ekans... he's evil! Evil! I'm not complaining, I like evil...

    The Silver Storm: Why do you have that user title if you get mad when someone calls you Skarmory?
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    Great chapter! This fic is getting better and better!

    Wow, I can't believe David killed Mudkip and Ekans!

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    Okay, SHinyMarril, I have to let this out, okay, you may be offended but, I can't beleive you for killing Mudkip and Ekans, and making Tony leave them behind. and to spite that Wartortle is alive. I had to let that out, you kill more pokemon than me, in a fanfic, that is sad. And Granbull ceremation not sure if I liked that holl saga, but i will keep reading. Dang I am glad you live in England, and I can tell, what are flats, and Chicken Pie? But everything else I did not complain about was pretty darn good. I can't beleive you killed Tony's pokemon. Is krystal next, and a question for Krystal, do you worry that one of your pokemon will die. Maybe seel, this is an edited post, since I did feel guilty for my insult toward you
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    Drangonfree: Thanks for that. You reminded me that I was going to change that

    Also SM (may I call you that? (if youknew who i was I hope you wouldn't mind) plaese?) What is up with Chris??????? Already starting to travel with some one else after just having a pokemon cremated. WTF?

    Question for Chris: WTF is wrong with you?!?!?! what do you think Krystal would say?!?!?!

    Question for Krystal: What DO you say to what Chris is doing??? Also my previous question still stands: When are you you going to lilsten to Chris???

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    The Silver Storm: I'm really sorry for not answering your last question! I didnt see it -_-;;

    Krystal: I feel kinda embaressed about rhe Dane thing...i walked right into his trap. I dont want to have to admit to Chris about this whole ordeal, and how he was right, but I can just tell he wants to gloat! I have faith in Chris, i always will, but love can put you under a spell...

    Dragonfree: Monica's based off someone at my school who is 14 and dresses like a 25 year old! HIGH heels, stockings, BRIGHT RED LIPSTICK eyeliner and mascara etc etc. But Monica has a part to play, but just after Chris leaves, in fact!

    Hanada: I want to show you all that this is just life, really. Dave wanted to make sure Tony and Misty couldn't escape, but he didn't realise Misty's hairband had a REAL Pokeball on it! Dave's ruthless, evil and whatnot: But Tony was going to give Mudkip to Brittney! What will he do?

    Powarun: You called me a bastard. I dont really have much more to say to you

    TSS: Call me SM, Shiny, Chris, anything! Chris ISNT travelling with Monica, is he? NO. He's just hanging around her while he's in Lavender. Monica, as i've said, has a more important part than one would first assume, but she doesnt travel with Chris. DON'T PANIC!

    Krystal: YOU'RE TRAVELLING WITH SOMEONE ELSE?

    Chris: NO! I havent gone anywhere with her!

    Krystal: MONICA YOU *****!

    Monica: Bring it on...

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    In a way I take it back but I was overwhelmed, and I could picture the site in my head and it haunted me. YOu can not go to sleep thinking about slit throats mental hospitals and getting revenge on a kid from school and keep sanity, I will get rid of it.
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    It's alright. I just felt Bastard was such a harsh term! Anyway, to answer a few more queries you had:

    A flat is basically a house. You get a block of flats, which are sorta like apartments cos they're stacked high and you dont get a garden, well, you do in some cases. You pay rent to stay in it.

    A chicken pie is GEORGEUS! its lovely chunks of suculent chicken with either a chicken sauce or a bubbling gravy inside a crusty pastry...*dribble* hehe. I'm glad i can get you to picture that, because it's a striking image.

    Well, Krystal wont die, thats for sure.

    Krystal: I am always worried for their well-being, but I think the worst is over. Chris is rather upset, I hope he's doing alright in Lavender Town. I guess they COULD get hurt...i'm just woried about Seel, the police haven't rung with any details.

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    Okay anything, I'll just call you what you called yourself on Serebii, Kecleon. Mmmmmmmmm chicken pot pie, *looks like Homer Simpson when he thinks about doughnuts*

    Hey could you actually come on Messenger for once, Its getting boring. lol, that probaly gave anyway who I am. Tommorrow if you don't know who i am, you will.

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    Oakbark:
    Hmmmmm........
    Dane's keeping quiet, and he said for TSS to f*** off, and not to get paranoid over nothing.
    He also said something about Dragonfree being cool, and then he started mumbling about Krystal, love and Shiny's second last post.

    Also, could TSS be one of your friends Chris?????
    It certainly sounds like it, unless he declares that he's the stalker you've had the last three months......

    There's something about Monica i like......dunno what, she justs sounds likeable in my mind. Then again, she may be working undercover for Team Rocket, just like my mysterious dark side, Dane. I wonder.......

    The scooter will be weird, will Chris let Krystal ride behind him, or will he ditch it in Celadon? Wait a sec, that'd be stupid......
    I suppose it'll speed up their progress through Kanto - was that the idea?

    Finally, i hate Baltoy too, but i thought he might be the unusual new catch. Funny, i always imagined Krystal would catch a Whismur, and that Chris would get a Nuzleaf.........

    Enough said, can't wait for the next chapter!

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    I'm not a stalker *looks from side to side*

    *punches the darn pikachu that was running in front of his feild of vision*

    sorry, I hate the electric rat. Anyways I'm actually am one of his friends, and i have always thought that Krystal would get a Bagon.......just a thought.

    *flies high into the sky to avoid attacks by Dane*

    I'm sure going to need a Dragonite up here soon!

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    Oakbark:
    Dane's not all bad you know, and i think he just hasn't taken a liking to you. Well, i cant blame him after some of the things you said.

    So, you are a friend, and you are a stalker.
    Wait a sec, what's that winged creature outside my window....
    aaarrrrggghhhhh!!!!!

    Wait, its just Ditto playing pranks on me again. Wait til i get my hands on him!!!!!!

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    So Dane says I'm cool? He can say whatever he wants, but I won't fall for it and have my pokémon stolen like Krystal! Get away from me you thief!
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    i couldn't care less what Dane thinks, now that my friend (a shiny dragonite, of the anime kind) has arrived.

    *clicks beak angrily at Dane*

    I hate theives so keep your evil alter ego away from me, or else

    *clash*

    minus one evil person....

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    okay, I have some questions

    chris=what do you think about tony going through the same thing
    as you did with krystal& dane?

    tony=do you feel the same way about misty now,and will you try to get dave back for what he did to you?

    seel= how's the new life with dane?


    I am the water king, if you want me look to the dark side of the water i'll be there

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    Oakbark:
    Dragonfree:
    I think Dane respects you for your evilness that you displayed in the last post, and i think he wont be seducing any girls for their pokemon again........
    TSS:
    Dane said to tell you that /qoute/ there is more than one way to skin a cat. /unquote/. Its a proverb- work it out for yourself.
    And from myself, Oakbark, dont blame me for Dane's actions, I cant control him.

    Oh, and Dane is laughing at you because you're not strong enough to protect yourself, and need a Dragonite.

    Grrrrrrr......DITTO!!!!!!! Come back with the computer mouse!!!!!

    -runs after Ditto, who has changed into Roadrunner-

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    He'd better not, if he tries anything, I have a Scyther which hasn't killed anyone for a long time and needs excercise.
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    I have at last returned. Good chapters, you certainly bring a lot of realism in here. I will send PM soon, although I'm really sorta embarrassed about this, and Serebii is down again, so it really doesn't matter now.

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    I'm back too!
    Well the last chapter was excellent, especially the reference to EBTV,

    “Some Australian guy introduced the buggy system a while back, and trainers have been stealing the idea ever since”

    I sighed. Lucky Australian.


    also, if Dane has escaped to the region of Reke then he's in for a battle fro a guy with a Cluff and a Lotad.

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    Oakbark:
    Dragonfree:
    The more you aggravate Dane, the more he's getting to like you - in a teenage crush kinda way. The way you're going you could steal Seel back from him, just by acting nice and.....err.......seducing him, like he did with Krystal.

    Jon UKX:
    Dane says he's nowhere near Reke, although he did say to keep your wits sharp, or Cluff may go splat in the night.

    By the way, does anyone know how to make a Ditto reform apart from making him laugh? People are starting to think I'm crazy going about the house tickling stuff.......

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    *flies over head with a can in talons*

    *drops can*

    There. A CFC free can of repel. Just srpay it around the house. That will get rid of it and also make it loose shape.

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    I just came to say that due to the lack of internet acsess for me, I just got done copying and pasting all your chapters I left off at on Word cause there's no telling when I'll be able to get back online (besides today.) Truth be told, I might not be able to be online like I used to until I finally go to college (can't wait!). Well, back to reading the previous posts from the other pages!

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    hey everybody, sorry I havent been here for a while. It seems Oakbark has been answering things on behalf of Dane, which is understanable, but either way, I will answer all the queries I can and set a few straight:

    JonUKX: Dane's story has seemingly come to a close (although you wouldn;t know it around here :-/) but I plan on letting anybody know when he can be used; some things are still to be ironed out.

    Watermaster: Chris & Krystal don't know what's happening to Tony and vice versa! So i guess they can't answer the first one.

    Tony: I fancy Misty, but I don't think she fancies me exactly. Now isn't a good time...

    Sorry, but Dane can't answer right now. He's...not here...Seel isn't, either. I hope he's Ok...





    Oakbark: Monica has a certain special something, doesn't she? I love writing her in the fic. The Scooter won't get ditched! Chris spent £274.99 on it! You'll have to wait and see, because, well, even at Chapter 31, such an event hasn't happened. Something...drastic happens when they meet back up...:-o Nuzleaf OR Baltoy? Nice choices :-). Chris might get one if he decides not to get two Pokemon from home when the 8-ball maximum is featured. Who knows?

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    “Good job” Thomas said, recalling his Rhydon. He was now on his 4th Pokemon, and I was on my 3rd! I waited with anticipation as he drew his next Ultra Ball. He threw it out and released a Gyrados. The large serpent leapt into the recently changed arena (after I knocked Rhydon out), its huge fangs lined in its gaping mouth. Could Heracross stay on? Ditto had been taken out; Ampharos was rendered hopeless and now Heracross looked slightly troubled. Salmenace, Kangaskhan and Rhydon had been taken down from Thomas’ team, so we were at least making progress.

    “Gyrados! Hyper beam!” Thomas roared. Gyrados powered up the white beam and forced it form his mouth. As it tore through the air, Heracross watched nervously. We needed something to do to evade it…

    “Quick attack!” I cut in, as Heracross zipped through the air. The attack had smashed into the stadium side, but shock absorbers had been placed to take care of any off-target attacks.

    “Gyrados! Leer!” Thomas said again. He looked about 14. He was very confident and didn’t look one bit nervous as he battled with his dragon-related Pokemon. Maybe he could enter Dragon Rock? I knew very little about Dragon rock, except for it was a very tough competition for dragon trainers.

    Gyrados’ eyes glowed a venomous red as Heracross became still. His joints seized up and stayed in place, causing him to feel nervous and vulnerable. Gyrados then forced his head forward and smashed it into Heracross, causing him to fall back.

    “Hera!” He clicked, as he flopped into the water. Thomas looked very happy as he ordered the follow up attack –
    “Slam!”

    Gyrados forced its fin-like tail down onto Heracross’ body, causing a ripple in the water. Heracross took damage and just lay there. He had a totally gross look to him, but he was a cool Pokemon.

    “Return!” I shouted. “Take care, Heracross”
    I put the ball away. Jolteon would be a good choice, but could he negotiate the water? Hmm. Haunter was a last-resort (I didn’t trust Roy after he lent me Ditto), and Ninetales would be hopeless on water.

    “Go Jolteon!” I shouted. Jolteon emerged from the fastball and his spikes instantly perked up. He brushed his feet on the layer of gravel that went around the circular pool, and prepared to jump. He would be jumping to the center of the water, which was also a sort of soil compound that acted as a pad for Jolteon. It went right down underwater, so Gyrados was limited to a somewhat donut arena.

    “Gyrados! Flamethrower!” Thomas cried. Gyrados opened its mouth, and instantly he shot a shotgun of flames from it at Jolteon. Jolteon used an agility to shoot to the left and onto the pad, leaving Gyrados enraged.

    “Gyrados! Again!” Thomas roared. Gyrados blasted the attack a 2nd time, and eventually scorched Jolteon. Jolteon pined and whimpered, but retaliated with a blast of thunder issued from each and every spike across his body.

    “No!” Thomas cried, as Gyrados roared in pain. The attack seared through his body, causing a slight dizziness effect. The sea serpents head then flopped down effortlessly and smashed against the center of the arena.

    As it smashed, water seeped onto it and Jolteon soon found himself stuck. He then leapt onto Gyrados’ body and used it to cross the arena and appear on the edge. Gyrados, however, suddenly shot back up and roared.

    “Not yet” Thomas said to me. “We need a little change here”
    “What?” I questioned. Thomas smiled.
    “Ice beam!” He roared.

    Gyrados powered up an ice beam, before issuing the attack from his mouth and across the arena. Now, as Jolteon evaded the attack, the whole arena was a solid layer of ice, waiting to be challenged on. As he powered the beam, Gyrados rose out the water (sorta flew…hovered in a way) and made sure to glaze every spot.

    “Jolteon!” I cried. “Get ready!”
    “No need” Thomas said, recalling Gyrados. “We’re done for this stage. I choose you!”

    Thomas released another Pokemon (now his 5th), and as the light took the shape of a new creature, I stared at his strange choice. The light died down and revealed a beautiful dog before me. Arcanine.

    “Lets see how you treat this challenge” Thomas told me. “Where I come from, we try and give people a lot more than they expected, and judging by your face I think I’ve done my hometown proud”

    I thought about this. Gyrados must have been Thomas’ only water Pokemon, or Pokemon able to use water in a battle, so he had turned the tables to make sure his ground Pokemon (or land I suppose) could get a good match in. Arcanine was his 2nd last, but what would he draw for his ace card? I thought about this, as Jolteon struggled to stay on the ice.

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    The scooter was actually pretty fast. I practised turns and whatnot around Lavender, while Monica watched in fascination. She seemed quite fond of me really, or maybe just my Pokemon. One foot was infront of the other, both hands on the handlebars, and Kecleon above the front wheel holding onto the front part that eventually split to form handlebars.

    “Very good!” She cried. Her Duskull was at her side. She promised me a battle with her at the end of the day, so I could train a little before heading off to Celadon to meet Krystal. I thought about Granbull: I wanted a commemorative Pokeball on my belt, but then realised 6-6 Battles wouldn’t be that good with 5 Pokemon as a maximum.

    Then, I considered catching a new Pokemon over here. Yea, that made a lot of sense. I left Granbull’s ashes in the Pokemon tower, and also left a Gastly I was rather keen on catching.

    We turned, and the scooter stopped infront of Monica. She smiled sweetly, as Kecleon leapt off to talk to Duskull.
    “So, fancy that battle?” I asked Monica.

    “Not now” She told me. “Later. We can head to Lavender Orchard and see if we can get you some new Pokemon”
    “Hmm…” I began. “It’s a bit soon, isn’t it?”

    “Oh, if you think so…” Monica began. I thought about it. Maybe she was right.
    “I just don’t know,” I told her. “We might as well head there”
    I had some Ultra Balls, but I wanted to just use a normal Pokeball. I had one Normal Pokeball for Electabuzz, a Moon ball for Umbreon, a Fastball for Kecleon, and Ultra balls for Pidgeotto and Bulbasaur.

    The orchard was a large green field, with cement walls around the outside. Lovely bushy trees bloomed here, and many Pichu and Sentret scampered around happily. Those two species were way too weak for me!

    We decided to head to a tree and pick some apples. Monica bought a basket for £1, and we headed off to a tree near the end of the field. There, a large overgrown bush curled across the wall and into the orchard.

    Bulbasaur used razor leaf to slice apples from branches, but his poor accuracy meant he would mostly hit Spearow, cut the apple in half or just take TOO much off, bringing a whole branch with him. Pidgeotto was in the treetops, but he just kept to himself. That stupid Pokemon…why was he like this?

    Umbreon slept, but Electabuzz helped catch the apples and put them in the basket. On my command, Kecleon ran up the tree and assisted the picking. Monica had her Duskull help too, but he seemed rather reluctant.

    The whole afternoon was spent picking apples, and by the end, we had a nice healthy batch. Our Pokemon all gathered around as Monica cut up the apples with her pocketknife. Yea, I was surprised she had one, too. Kecleon began eating, as did the rest of the team. However, from the bushes, I saw a slinky figure emerge. I ignored it.

    Then, piercing the skies with its deadly hiss, I heard a noise.

    I turned quickly to see a large black serpent strike. It leapt into the air, its slinky gold patterned body trailing behind, and prepared to hit Kecleon. My wily chameleon leapt to the left and slashed the Pokemon across the back of the head.

    “Vipe!” It hissed. It turned, and shot forward again. Kecleon leapt back two steps and blasted a barrage of stars from his stripe, but the snake got back by shooting poison sting from its mouth.

    “Duskull! Help us out!” Monica cried. Duskull ran forward and held his spooky paws out, as a nightshade shot out each one. The combined force hit the Snake, but it jabbed Duskull with its pointed arrowhead tail. Duskull didn’t take much damage, but floated behind Jessica. The coward.

    “Chris! Use Umbreon!” Monica told me. I nodded.
    “Umbreon, go!”

    Umbreon got up, his mouth sticky from the apples. He ran forward at the snake, which managed to shoot out the way. Angered, It shot another poison sting from its mouth and peppered Umbreon.

    “Work on resistance!” I called. At the reserve, we’d trained to build up Umbreon’s resistance. He had been bad at this, but now, months later, improvement was definitely visible. Umbreon fired a swift from his ring on his forehead, hitting the snake.

    “Viperrrrr” It hissed. Tail end glowing bright silver, the Pokemon swung it around and smacked Umbreon in the ribs. Umbreon fell back, but got back up and used its quick attack. The snake started panting: it was weak.

    “Team attack!” I shouted. “Kecleon, Psybeam! Umbreon, Swift! Bulbasaur, Razor leaf! Pidgeotto, wing attack! Electabuzz, thunderbolt!”

    The power of five attacks all shot forward at their own speed. The snake Pokemon (I had never SEEN such a strange, but oddly favoured Pokemon) was attacked numerous times, before collapsing in a coiled up heap.

    “Never mess with me,” I snapped. I then thought to myself. That thing had been tough. Tough, yea. I needed a tough Pokemon, to fill a slight gap, and as Pokemon go, this one wasn’t bad. I thought it over, before drawing a Pokeball.

    “This one’s for Granbull” I said. “POKEBALL, GO!”
    I hurled the ball forward, which smacked against the serpent. It was drawn inside by a bright red light, and once it was sucked in completely, the ball shut, dropping in the soft springy grass and rolling slightly. One ping later, it was verified to my name, and I had successfully captured this…this Pokemon.

    “Great!” Monica said. “Let’s get it healed later on, and we’ll get it verified by the Nurse”
    After we ate our ‘victory’ ‘meal’, we got our bags and walked through the town to the Pokemoncenter. I didn’t know quite what this was, but it better be a lot more social than Pidgeotto and Bulbasaur…

    *

    Megan

    The ship was still sailing onwards. It was exciting. Jet and me stared out across the sea as we continued on.

    “So, what was this ‘plan’ you had?” Jet asked me. I thought about weather or not I should say right now or not. Yes. It would be a good idea.
    “I wanted to start fresh,” I told him. “You know, go somewhere else and live a new life”

    Jet seemed shocked. I continued.

    “I have little to live for over here; all my Pokemon are gone, I lost my job and I have no money”

    “But what makes you think moving somewhere else will change all that?” Jet asked me. I cleared my throat.
    “I can do my best,” I told him. “And I’m counting on you to be there for me, be there to help me out”

    “But what can I do?” Jet protested. “And anyway, look at Al! Holmes is tracking him down because he tried to dessert his job, do you want the same problems?”
    “Well...” I started. “I was hoping I could…erm…I could fake my own death”

    Jet stared at me blankly. He held my hands in his.
    “Megan, you cannot be serious!” He snapped. “I mean…DEATH? You’d be lying to the whole world”

    “But the only person that would CARE about me would be you, Jet” I pined. “And you’d know the truth”

    Jet looked at me. He was obviously upset and confused, but he seemed to understand. He seemed to realise what I’d gone through, and he seemed to know, to know that I needed him through this tough, difficult time.

    “Ok” I said, gritting his teeth. “We’ll do it. But before we do, we have to take over the Gym, and we’ll make sure that’s our best mission yet”

    I nodded, and looked out as we pulled into Vermillion dock. Jet, myself and a few other rockets packed into a van, Jet driving, me in the back, and prepared to drive off. I kept to myself as the rockets talked to themselves, knowing that Mightyena and I had to help Jet as best we could to get that Gym in our possession.

    *

    Krystal

    Today we hadn’t really done much. I trained all my Pokemon (including Kingdra) against Kimi’s Pokemon, but they were rather weak and puny. She had a Solrock, however, which was rare and very well trained.

    I was in the town with Marill and Flaaffy (us 3 making a common scene now), and we were looking around shops and stores. I was starting to get a little bit bored, but I continued to look around a skaters shop, pretending I wanted a chain.

    We were now starting to leave town. I wandered through the light forest, wanting to train against some wild Pokemon. My eyes lit up, however, when something stood infront of me. It was a sort of dragonfly thing, but six legs.

    “Vibrava!” It screeched. They were good to battle against, I thought. I looked at Marill.
    “Rollout!”

    Marill leapt into the air and rolled into a ball, before dropping, screeching as she hit the ground and shooting at Vibrava. However, the bug shot into the air, leaving Marill rolling around frantically. Marill got out the rollout, and shot a water gun.

    The attack hit, and Vibrava flapped out the sky lop-sidedly. It flopped on the ground and started clicking its name. I knew it could take more damage. I then got Marill to fight with Flaaffy.

    “Marill! Flaaffy! Doubleslap!” I shouted. Flaaffy raced forward and slapped Vibrava, as did Marill. Marill then leapt back into the air and shot a water gun from her mouth, soaking Vibrava. The bug was battered, and lay there hopelessly. Flaaffy then released a thunderbolt from his horns and shocked Vibrava very hard, as the water conducted the electricity.

    Vibrava twitched slightly. It was beaten, and easily, too. I looked around, noticing for the first time in quite some time that I had entered the forest. I decided it was best to get back to Celadon and meet Brock and Kimi.

    As I wandered back along the path, Vibrava lay there. It twitched a little more, before it was taken over by a bright white glow. The glow shrouded its body, and caused it to change and form into a much larger, much fiercer dragon. The new Pokemon looked around with its huge red eyes, experiencing this new feeling of freedom with its much broader wings.

    As it flapped, it shot into the air and through the forest. A large gust of wind whipped up behind it, and it tore off towards Celadon, seeking revenge.

    *

    Chris

    After getting the Pokemon healed, it was clarified that this Pokemon was a Seviper. It was a poison type Pokemon, and very experienced, probably an adult. I decided to keep him on my team for a while and see how he fitted in; if he did badly and couldn’t get on well enough, then I’d send him home in exchange for Weezing, or maybe my useless Cascoon.

    Monica had gone home for her tea, so I decided I might as well ring home. I hadn’t rung the family for a while, so I could guess that they’d either be worried, carrying out a search party or just sitting on the couch.

    After dialling the number, I waited patiently, as Seviper was talking to all my other Pokemon. Umbreon seemed rather fond of Seviper, chummy in a way, but Electabuzz was rather reluctant to socialise with this ‘replacement’ for his friend Granbull. Kecleon was with me, although he was trying to talk to Bulbasaur.

    “Hey Suzie!” I said, as my sister picked up the phone.
    “Chris! Finally!” Suzie said happily. “How are things?”
    “Great…” I began. “Although…”

    “Although what?” Suzie inquired, keen on what was wrong.
    “Granbull was killed” I began, pulling myself together. “In the Saffron City explosion”
    “You were in that?” Suzie exclaimed. “Oh god!”

    “But don’t worry” I said. “I just have a broken arm”
    I had the cast off now, because it got all itchy so I just threw it away.
    “Well, I’m sorry about Granbull” Suzie explained. “We all are. But guess what? Cascoon evolved, and now he’s a really lively Dustox!”

    “Cool” I began. “But…what’s a Dustox?”
    Suddenly, Suzie shrieked loudly, diving below the phone. A rather ugly moth fluttered over to the screen and cried its name in a shrill and piercing voice.

    “…Hey there, Dustox” I said lightly. I saw Wobbuffet tear across the screen as Dustox followed. Suzie got back up and brushed her hair from her face.
    “Sorry” She began. “But Dustox has spread a sleep powder through the room. I’ll see you real soon!”

    Suzie hung up, as did I. I turned around, and saw Pidgeotto and Bulbasaur sleeping, Electabuzz sitting on the floor lonesomely, Umbreon and Seviper talking quietly, and Kecleon looking up at me.

    “Come on, guys” I said. I got out the two Ultra Balls and recalled Bulbasaur and Pidgeotto, recalled Umbreon in his moon ball, and recalled Electabuzz in his normal Pokeball. I looked down at Seviper.

    “Let’s get you a battle in”

    We wandered off out the Pokemoncenter, and looked around lavender town. It was peaceful, but I eyed a little girl and her Vulpix sitting on a rock, eating some lunch. Seviper eyed Vulpix and swung his tail around, picking up the little fox and dragging her towards his face.

    “GET OFF!” The girl screamed. Vulpix was crying to herself, as Seviper said his name happily.
    “He’s just being friendly!” I protested, as Seviper made a few funny faces. I grabbed Vulpix and wrenched her from Seviper’s grip, before handing her to her trainer. She ran off, petting Vulpix.

    Looking across at Seviper, who looked anything but guilty, I soon became aware of how many dangers awaited a poisonous viper that liked to make friends.
























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    Yay! Flygon! I liked that chapter. Seviper seems to have a funny personality... heh. What would happen if someone got a Zangoose...
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    Great chapter SM, even though I'm not really a Seviper fan (I prefer Zangoose) I think he makes a cool addition to Chris' team.
    When I introduce Dane in my fic cos chapter 6 is almost done and chapter 7 is in the pipelines.
    BTW chapter 7 is called Wurmple, Taillow and DANEger

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    Oakbark:
    Sorry about the last post. I deleted it as it was a bit too morbid for this place...

    Great chapter SM, and Seviper sure sounds weird. I hope one of Chris/Monica's pokemon don't just disappear - that guy could be trouble

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    Great as usual. I hate to pry, but spelling errors: Gyarados and Salamence. I understand though, that is a common mistake, and the new pokes still need to get used to. I'm sorry to hear that you won't come back to Serebii. That's the way it is, I guess. Seviper is an interesting addition to the team.

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    Great chapter, I loved it!

    Flygon is cool, I hope Krystal catches it. And Seviper is nice, I knew either Chris or Krystal would get it!

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    I decided to read ahead since it's taking me a long time to catch up (I had to play Pokémon Stadium 2, then do my story, thencut the jungle of a lawn in both the back and front of the house, then do my regular chores! I know. Excuses, excuses...), but it's not hard to tell whats going on. I really liked the title of Chapter 22 (in fact, I NEVER read ahead of a story, but because this chapter's title caught my eye sooooo much, I had to!)

    Gyarados, Seviper, Vibrava...(I really thought Yanma at first).

    And Dustox is not ugly! It's appearnce is just challenged.

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    Sorry for not replying right away too, like SygmaXE, and my reasons, went forty miles in a new car to pick up parts for an engine for my truck. THne working on it, in th emean time I was reading fanfics. Soo. My thoughts are, it was well written, Krystal shall catch Furigon, or Flygon. SO I could be correct and she needs another dragon. Chris's Seviper, didn't see it coming, with Ekans and all, but I like it. Favorite car is a Viper. As for Dustox, it sounds cool, maybe it should team up with a crazy Yanma. Cheers
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    Dragonfree: Isn't he just great? Seviper, IMHO, is a fruitful member to the team. Glad you enjoyed the chappie, keep reading!

    Jon UKX: I'm afraid it may have to wait, Jon: Dane's whole life thing isn't exactly finalised, i'm still just making ideas. Zangoose? Meh, he's alright. FYI, He makes an appearence soon!

    Oakbark: Lol! Well, you never know... I hope the other team members get along Ok with him! Monica only has Duskull :-( but she's gonan catch something else later........and No, i can't tell you cos i dont no what it is yet

    Jukain: Terribly sorry. I always pronounced Gyarados (gai-rah-doss) instead of (gaya-rah-doss). My bad I used to call Suicune (soo-ih-seen) and Meganium (mega-ger-an-ium) Salamenace, as well, i am sorry. As i said in response to Dragonfree, Seviper is just so cool IMHO. I want one on Sapphire...*sigh*

    Hanada: Yea, he is amazingly amazing. Lets just say Krystal ad Flygon...well...you'll see...lets say Kimi interludes...

    Sygma: Glad you liked the title. Dustox is not ugly, is he? he's sorta avarage, but KEWL! You'll maybe see him later, perhaps, and i'm hoping you'll post more now you've caught up! Yanma OR Vibrava, both are weird dragonfly-thing-hybrids :-p

    Powarun: Geez, 40miles? A truck? wow, a side of you i've never seen before...I wasn't keen on Seviper on the team, what with Tony's Ekans as you stated, but I found the three came down to Absol, Huntail or Seviper. Huntail was water onyl, something I liked...but found may lead to be underused. Absol was too much like Umbry, but Absol DOES have a good role in Chapter 31.










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    -More from Tony as he and Misty find their need for speed...

    -While Thomas releases something breathtaking on the Miami Stadium!
    I watched in fascination as the ball opened up. A scarecrow emerged; covered in needles, with a very sinister look splattered over his face. He looked scary, and was a vivid green colour. This did look intimidating, but more so because I had never seen it before – I’d battled all the other members of Thomas’ team before, so the surprise had worn off.

    -Chris and Al meet...and exchange stories. Could this be the start of a cheesy spin-off?
    The two of us stood there. We were bonding over dead Pokemon…now, who would have thought Sandra had brought us two together? I sighed. Krystal…I’d be seeing her again soon.

    “Goodbye” Al said, looking at me. “Gotta stay on the run”
    He gave me a small bomb. It was the size of my palm, and was a camouflage green colour.

    “It’s a sleep bomb,” He said. “For the security guards”
    I smiled. Maybe there were advantages to Team Rocket, if you got all these funky gizmos. I clutched it tightly, recalled Bulbasaur and Seviper and hopped onto the scooter. We pressed on towards Celadon.


    -It's Dragon Day in Celadon, the day when people celebrate Dragon Pokemon. But who should gatecrash the party but Flygon! Krystal and Kimi's rivalry is tested when Kimi does something unexpected...
    Watching in awe, I couldn’t keep my eyes off the shards of my Ultra Ball. I then looked across at Kimi, pulling myself away from my shattered dreams. She drew a gorgeous ball from her belt and held it back.

    “NO!” I shouted, spit flying from my mouth. SHE CAN’T CATCH THAT!



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