Pokemon TCG: Origin of the Cards!

[Houndoom_Lover]

Oh my gosh! ^-^ This is gunna be so much fun ^__^ *curls up around the story* And I caught it at chapter one. It makes me want dumplings. So bad. I wish I had money. To buy them.

I excite for this story~ *vrooms away*

[Charles Legend]

Hey! Just had a quick readthrough; (i'm avoiding an assignment at the moment but anyhoo...) and you've got an interesting story here. reminds me a bit of Card Captors meets Pokémon lol.

A few things to work on, like grammar, but I don't have time to point out errors here and there. I'm curious to see where you take this though :-)

Thank you first of all for replying and , well no I actually Ironicly I got the Idea from Yugioh, (I call it Ironic because as far as I know this is one of the only fics based off of the Pokemon Trading card game, were as Yugioh has at lest a dozon here at TPM) Bokugon, and Dinosaur King, only insted of the monsters coming from the cards they are being traped in the cards...

Also yes I partly based Mark Mint ans Set off of Gold, Kris and Silver... that is do to the fact that I been thinking a lot about Jotho lately, and yes I know...

Oh my gosh! ^-^ This is gunna be so much fun ^__^ *curls up around the story* And I caught it at chapter one. It makes me want dumplings. So bad. I wish I had money. To buy them.

I excite for this story~ *vrooms away*

Well I don't know about that, Houndy I don't have that much planed out yet but I well say this a lot of trainers in the fic will be mad that their Pokémon were turned into cards...

Oh and just a small note Professor Cardealém has a a double meaning Card deal em and wllI also based his name off of cardamom which is the name of is used for herbs within two genera of the ginger family...

Also while I have not worked on the story that much I have started to make a new over wold map of the regent in which this fic takes place in, which may help to some degree...

Up next on their way to Porf. Cardealém's Lab Mark, Mint and Set recive a mesage from two talking dogs. The Professor give each of them a starter deck based off their starter Pokemon, Mark receives the Cyndaquil and Friends Deck, Mint receives the Chikorita and Friends deck, and Set receives the Totodile and Friends Deck.

~charles Legend