Very nice, this story really has me interested. Best newcomer fic in ages. Not only do we get to know the characters on a regular base, we also know their personal feelings, their thoughts. You can sympathize with them on a personal level, and that my friend, is something not much writers can produce.

I'm interested to see where this is going, the darkness surrounding the fic now really spices up the story. Let's see where this will end up.

Also, Von Dijkhuizen (aside from the Von) is a Dutch name, not a german name. I liked the vampires, and yes, needed more ladies

I'm puzzeled (get it? get it?)

Ahem. Yes.