Poetry Corner

[PancaKe]

Lois, I love the imagery of "I promise girl, to dance inside you and make pain move along." LOL you guys are all so dirty! Thinking nothing but sex all day. ahaha. Or was that the All American Rejects part of the poem? Sigh I'm not sure!


And I think you guys are right. I love to just write how I feel, and I love that you guys do too I guess in that way, we all share so much of ourselves here. </end sappy reflective moment>

[Shadow Wolf]

Louis, I love the imagery of "I promise girl, to dance inside you and make pain move along." LOL you guys are all so dirty! Thinking nothing but sex all day. ahaha. Or was that the All American Rejects part of the poem? Sigh I'm not sure!

Well, I wasn't thinking "that way" when I wrote that verse. I was actually thinking how I would dance in her soul (when you dance, you become full of energy, happiness and forget about the troubles in life. When I dance inside her, I mean to bring her energy, happiness and make her forget about her troubles in life).

Dance inside is one of the songs of the band, and in almost every verse of the poem, I have at least one song of the band, so that's why I said that the credits belong to the band (If I recall correctly, every verse, except the last one, has at least one song from the band).

I'll try to be more careful when writing verses, jejeje