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    I have just realised something that you said in the last post!!!!
    *slaps head hard*
    How could i have been so blind?????
    The Organisation are really going strong, and by the looks of it - going to get a lot stronger.....

    I wont tell anyone my thoughts, but if my suspicions are correct then {insert name here} is in for a surprise.........

    Also Chris, I saw your fic idea, and it sounds cool!

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    Oakbark: Intriguing! The Orginisation becomes a central part of the fanfic, and you'll see plenty more of the Organisation as the fic rolls on! Thanks about the fic ideas!

    Well, strangely, you may ask yourself, here is Chapter 27. My social life is spinning out of control, and since my mates are round fridays most weeks, chances of FRTC Chappies being seen are a lot more common, Chapters are being posted wednesday and [n] sunday [/b]. ENJOY!



    The Indigo Road
    Chapter 27 - The Miami League Finals
    By Shinymarill

    Krystal

    “Don’t do it,” I hissed. As Kimi walked through from the kitchen with the food on a tray, Ampharos leapt infront of her and wailed. Screaming, Kimi dropped the tray and sent milk, toast and butter flying over me. I leapt up as the cold butter slipped down my back…it was so gooey and ikky! I screamed and tried to get it out, while Ampharos chuckled and ran off.

    “I SAID NO! NO!” I cried. “I need a shower…”

    I ran off to the bathroom. Kimi and Brock went to clean up, and Ampharos just ran into the back garden. He was always playing jokes on us: yesterday, he gave Kimi an electric shock! She was unconscious for an hour…

    *

    After I got freshened up, I walked into the living room to see Kimi and Brock watching Jerry Springer. It looked sorta boring: lesbian Jynx’ telling their secret to their Smoochum children. Gross.

    Marill was talking to Lotad, so I took Espeon to the front of the house. I petted her as we sat on the doorstep, watching Celadon City walk past us. People shopping…kids training Pokemon, annoying townies on their cell phones, and even a boy and his Grimer dropping their litter on the floor.

    “We’re going soon” I hushed to Espeon. “Chris will be arriving any day now”
    I want to show you something, ” A voice said. I looked down at Espeon, whose jewel was a silver colour now. It shimmered and rippled.

    “Was…was that you?” I asked her. She nodded, although she wasn’t facing me. “You’re…you’re telepathic?”

    I am, ” She said, her voice filling my mind. “ You’re worrying about Chris…but I can sense someone else who may be causing you to get concerned
    “Yes…there is someone” I began.

    Al ” I heard.

    “That’s right! Al!” I gasped. Espeon got up and walked along the street, before turning and facing me. She sat down rather casually, her bead constantly throbbing with a silver glow. It was beautiful.

    Let me show you what will happen,

    I watched her, as she started to become blurred. I watched. Keen, I was very keen to see what this was. My mind suddenly throbbed painfully…the people around us morphed into trees, or flattened down to become the ground. I then looked. I was on a white pier, out to sea. The City was not too far away, but it looked rather empty. Espeon sat by me as I stood up.


    “Where are we?” I asked Espeon. She looked at me, blinking delicately.
    Fuchsia City, Kanto

    “We are?” I gasped. “This is near Seafoam Village!”
    True. However, this place is full of twists and turns…I urge you to stay. Stay with me, and we can be a duo again…

    “I’d love to take you back,” I said pleasantly. “But…don’t you like it with Kimi?”
    She is very nice, but I want to be with you again ” She hissed. I felt rather insecure around this scary Pokemon.

    WHY did you leave me? WHY did I wake the next day to find out my trainer didn’t want me? WHY DON’T YOU WANT ME? YOU BRING ME INTO THE WORLD AND THROW ME AWAY LIKE A RAGDOLL! I WOULD BE A DRAGON IF I COULD! ” She screamed.

    “Please! I didn’t mean it like that!” I cried.

    YOU CAN STAY HERE! ROT HERE WITH ME! ” Espeon cried happily. I screamed out loud…she was going to keep me here! I cried out, hands over my ears, trying to escape from this. I got up and tried to run, but I couldn’t.

    If you won’t listen to ME…” Espeon growled, glowing white. Her shape shifted, until she was around my height, with a long sleeved t-shirt, orange with white sleeves, baggy navy blue denim shorts and chunky shoes.

    “Chris?” I asked the figure.
    STAY HERE Krystal ” Chris told me. “ IT’LL BE GREAT…

    I panicked as a tear slipped down my face. I couldn’t stand this. Was it really Espeon, or Chris? I couldn’t tell…I just fell to my knees infront of Chris and burst into tears.

    “Just leave me alone” I wept. Chris growled, and walked over to me. I screwed my eyes shut, but heard a clatter. Looking up, a large purple, black and gold snake had leapt onto Chris and sunk its large red fangs into his neck.

    “CHRIS!” I cried. The snake looked up, blood dripping from its fangs. Chris was now pale, but lay there, motionless. Just then, he glowed. White light took over his body, and he started to shrink back to the Espeon form. She had a wound on her side, and her forked tail was parted. The background dissolved before us, and we were now outside Kimi’s house again.

    “Chris?” I asked. I heard a motor to my left, and upon turning, saw Chris and Kecleon riding into Celadon on a petrol scooter. Chris leapt off it (after turning it off) and ran over to the snake, which looked rather happy and playful.

    “Good job” Chris said to it. “You want to go back in your ball now?”
    Did Chris OWN this thing? Wow! It was a ferocious viper of some sort. The snake nodded, and Chris recalled it in a Pokeball. Kecleon ran over and hugged my leg affectionately.

    “Great to see you again!” I cried. I ran over to Chris and hugged him tightly. “It’s been so long!”
    “Yea, I know” Chris said back. “How’s everything?”
    “Flaaffy evolved,” I said happily. “But…I saw Dane again”

    “Oh crap” Chris said.
    “He told me he worked for Team Rocket…and he stole Seel!”
    I cried. Chris comforted me, but I then became aware of the chain around his neck. It was a pretty nice metal one, but I then became fully aware of his lip ring! I got out the hug and touched the ring.

    “Very nice” I said happily. “Erm…it’s bleeding”
    “Oh…right” Chris muttered, glowing red. I chuckled, and got out a tissue, cleaning the dried, cracked blood from his chin. He was very grateful. Suddenly, Espeon got back up and raced forward, tackling Chris to the ground.

    “HEY!” He cried. “Kecleon, go!”
    His Kecleon ran forward and headbutted Espeon. She whipped her tail around and caught Kecleon up, before thwacking him onto the ground numerous times. Kecleon got blood on his face and screamed in pain as Espeon smashed his face in.

    “STOP IT! ESPEON STOP!” I cried.
    “Kecleon! Ancient Power!” Chris shouted. “Show her!”

    Kecleon glowed a dim bronze. Espeon let go, intrigued, as Kecleon held his arms out wide. His eyes narrowed, a breeze caught the air around him, and his stripe was brown, a rocky brown. With a roar, Kecleon blasted a beam of gold energy from his stripe and forced it into Espeon. She cried out as she was flung into the air. Smacking against the ground, blood spilled from her nose.

    “Wow” Krystal said. “Thanks”
    “What was she doing to you?” Chris asked.
    “She took me to Fuchsia: something bad will happen to Al there” Krystal said. “I just don’t know what”

    “Well…were heading there, aren’t we?” Chris asked. “Oh, do you like my ring?”
    He wore a very nice silver lip ring. I admired it for a few seconds. “There’s some dried blood around the outside though”

    “Oh crap” Chris said, wiping it with his sleeve.
    “Let’s introduce you to Brock and Kimi” I said, chuckling. We wandered inside, but Chris released Umbreon to see his sister while we went inside.

    I tried to warn her, I really did ” Espeon purred.

    *

    Rika

    Cacturne was doing very well, having riddled my team down to Ninetales and Haunter. I had absolutely no faith in the apparently ‘wickedly strong’ ghost, as Ditto had failed pretty easily against Tom’s dynamite Salmenace. Ninetales, however, was really unable to use fire attacks through fear of melting the arena, so we had to just use physical blows.

    “Cacturne, needle arm!” Tom shouted. Cacturne spun around and released a storm of needles towards Ninetales. Agile as she may be, Ninetales was unable to evade every hit from the barrage of needles, and collapsed in pain. Wearily, she got up, only to be pummelled by Cacturne’s meteor punch.

    “Get up and use quick attack!” I shouted. Ninetales and her flamethrower were unstoppable, but she was rendered almost hopeless if she was endangering herself by using it.

    She sped along the arena and whisked past Cacturne, dealing minor damage and receiving recoil from his needles. Cacturne turned, glaring at my beautiful fox with his evil stare. Ninetales leapt over his head and landed, slipping and eventually falling over. Cacturne then started to create a shadow ball in his large arms.

    “Keep pulling in shadows!” Tom ordered. His next words were at me. “Give you locals a challenge”
    “Oh yea? I’ll make my land proud. YOU won’t stand a chance!” I cried. “Ninetales, use a take down!”

    Ninetales ran forward at Cacturne, but, as optimistic and proud as she was, she was just to weak to be able to inflict any major damage. Cacturne took the attack very well, but simply forced a meteor punch into Ninetales’ jaw, knocking her down to the ground.

    “Ninetales, you’ve done really well” I began. “Return”
    Recalling Ninetales, I prepared to get out Haunter’s Pokeball. He was my last choice. I then considered Tom, who could probably use Gyrados if he needed to. I prepared to release Haunter into the stadium, but a strange white glow took over the ball.

    “What’s going on?” I asked myself, as the ball floated from my grip. It opened, still glowing bright white, and released Haunter. He floated in a specific circle, crying his name. I then thought back to Haunter’s, and how being used by a new trainer can help them evolve! Trade evolution I think it was called. Nowadays they had grown powerful enough to evolve independently, but this was the lazy method.

    Releasing his hands, Haunter started to glow red. Within seconds, his arms shot back and delved into his body, causing the ghostly figure’s ‘skin’ (or whatever it was…) to warp and twist. The body developed legs, something not found in Haunter in its current or Gastly state. The light started to die down and fade away, as a proud Gengar floated in mid-air.


    “Gengar! Oh my god!” I cried. “A Gengar!”
    “You may have a new Pokemon, but we can take it down no problem. Cacturne! Try using a razor leaf” Tom said savagely. He had never seemed too competitive; he’d shout and go out his reach, but came across as someone who wouldn’t take losing badly. Cacturne’s arms swished out, sending two sharp leaves straight at Gengar. I knew this wouldn’t be a problem, and I was right. Gengar chuckled rather demonically as he soon became transparent, causing the leaves to disappear through him.

    “Gengar!” He cackled. He stepped back and started to create a shadow ball in his hands. He drew energy from around him to form the crackling violet sphere. The sphere grew bigger and bigger, until it was the size of a watermelon.

    Gengar launched the ball like you would pass a netball. It flew at Cacturne, who, despite his punch forward at it to destroy it, was struck by it painfully, resulting in him stumbling back clumsily. He gasped, facing Gengar and narrowing his eyes. Gengar then floated up into the air and held his palm flat. His eyes flickered an intense orange, as a small flame shot up from his palm. With a cry, he forced it from out his palm towards Cacturne.

    Even Tom looked worried, as Cacturne’s left arm was set alight. Cacturne dashed from left to right, swinging his arm around in a desperate attempt to subdue the flames.

    “Good job Gengar!” I said happily. “Now, use a curse!”

    As Gengar chanted his name, obviously an incantation of some sorts, Cacturne was slowly rooted to the spot and left vulnerable to attack. The muscles in his body seized up drastically, and soon the cactus Pokemon found himself ready to bite the dust.

    “You’re doing great!” I assured Gengar. “Power up a hyper beam, NOW!!!”

    Gengar looked stunning as he floated up into the air. Holding both hands out; He commanded an orange blast of focused energy to be released from his hands. The Hyper beam shot across the arena and pierced the sky with its blazing power. Cacturne watched from his rooted spot as the beam flew on…

    “Rapid spin!” Tom shouted, right at the last minute. With a swish of his large, truncheon-like arms, Cacturne pulled out of his curse and repelled the hyper beam. Gengar chuckled as the beam flew through his body, giving him a tickling sensation to please his tastes.

    “THOMAS HAS TURNED THE TABLES WITH A WELL CALCULATED RAPID SPIN!” The announced roared, trying to drown out the crowd’s cheers. “AN EASY VICTORY FOR THE CHAMPION HAS TURNED AROUND RATHER QUICKLY!”

    “Come on, Gengar, lets see a perish song!” I said. Gengar nodded, cleared his throat and began wailing loudly. Cacturne tried holding his arms to his ears, blocking out the pain, but he couldn’t bear it.

    “CACTURNE!” Tom roared.
    “Gengar, use an ice beam,” I breathed. Gengar opened his mouth and blasted the smooth, pearly ice attack. Cacturne perished as the cold ice spread across his body, causing him to go blue. Gengar forced his fist into Cacturne’s face and he fell.

    He fell. Down, down to the ground.

    I watched, as Tom recalled him. Gengar floated by my side as we watched him carefully.

    “What can I say?” Tom began. “You’re Damn good”
    The crowd roaring was intense: I smiled at him, as he turned and walked into the locker rooms.

    *

    “Well, You’re father has been caught up with some…business” Mum said. “I expect you’ll be getting the next ferry home?”

    “Yea, I will be…” I began. I paused. “Actually…I’m in possession of a Ditto: He can transform into a Wailord and sail me home!”
    “Well, I guess so” Mum said. I chuckled to her.
    “I’ll see ya around” I said, before hanging up.

    Turning, I saw Roy.

    “Excellent battle” He said. “I…I’m heading back to Hoenn to compete in more contests. I catch Pokemon, raise them, win contests with them, and send them home, so I think you can keep Gengar. Besides…he seems to like you”

    “Really? Thanks Roy!” I said happily.
    “Well, I’ll need Ditto, though” He continued.
    “That’s too bad…I was going to have him transform into Wailord and take us home…” I muttered.

    “THAT’S IT!” Roy cried. “I can go home with you! I’ll go and get my bags and we can leave!”

    I didn’t believe it. Roy ran off, just as Tom walked forward.

    “Hey” I said lightly.
    “Rika…you’re really strong” Tom said. “I really enjoyed battling you, even if I lost”
    “Any plans?” I asked.

    “Hell yea! I got an unofficial Gym in Kanto: I’m training for Dragon Rock, and that’s why I competed here AND started my Gym up” He told me.

    “Sounds great,” I muttered. “But…but I have to get back home. There’s been a lot of action, I’d say”

    “I need some action,” Tom blurted out. He blushed as I stared at him.
    “Now, now, you’re only 14” I said, chuckling. Tom laughed.
    “It’s been so good meeting you, and I hope I do again,” Tom said. I smiled at him.

    “Likewise”

    Roy ran down the stairs with his bag.
    “Let’s go!”

    I sighed, before glancing at Tom. He was bright enough to see what was going on…He just gave his broad smile. For a 14-year old, he was a really nice person.

    “Have a nice time,” He said, smiling. I returned the smile with a disapproving sigh, before walking off with Roy.

    *

    Chris

    “Well, call again!” Kimi cried. “It’s been great seeing you”
    “Thanks for the accommodation” Krystal replied, waving. “It was only 2 star, but it was ALRIGHT…”

    Kimi didn’t take it well. I went off on my Scooter, Pidgeotto in the air and Kecleon by my feet. Krystal walked, so I made sure I didn’t go far. We’d probably end up taking it in turns or something.

    “I like your earring” I said.
    “Thanks” Krystal replied. “It hasn’t gone septic, has it?”
    “Well…sorta” I began. Krystal sighed.
    “I’ll get it checked out at the next City” She began.

    We continued on until we got to a signpost, directing us to Fliscoula, the next big destination in our journey south. I had really missed Krystal…and I hope she had missed me. I thought about Sandra, Dane, Al and everything that had ever happened in the past few weeks.

    “Come on, I’ll get you a present in Fliscoula” I told her. Excited, she leapt into the air.
    “Great! Marill, come on!”

    Marill leapt onto her trainers shoulder and the two ran off. I turned the CC up, before pushing down and scooting forward, Pidgeotto flying ahead and Kecleon watching from about kneecap high.

    Sure, we may not be famous trainers with really strong Pokemon. We’re not constantly on a new adventure, never really helping anybody with his or her Pokemon, but I’d like to think I led a pretty damn good life.

    I then heard a scream. Pushing down on the accelerator, we pushed on around the bend to see Krystal lying on the ground.

    “KRYSTAL!” I screamed. Marill lay unconscious as a white animal ripped Krystal’s cape. I watched in horror as blood trickled from Krystal’s lip. I clenched my fists, leapt off the scooter and stared at the Pokemon.

    It’s an Absol. I studied at a pre-college in Pontaricò before I left, and Absol seemed like a very dangerous Pokemon. They lived atop mountains, and they’re pretty damn destructive with that blade. It looked up at me, blood dripping from its sharp teeth.

    “YOU MONSTER!” I roared. I grabbed three Pokeballs between my fingers, before charging forward and pelting Absol with them. Two missed, opened on the ground, and Seviper and Electabuzz formed behind Absol. Umbreon formed infront, and faced off against this formidable opponent. There was something about those two…they actually looked rather alike in terms of stances and eyes…

    Through my violent temper, a tear slipped down my face.

    “Hold on, Krystal” I muttered.

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    Wow, I hope Chris catches Absol. Just the thing to become friends with Bulbasaur.

    By the way, I now also completed reading From Rookie To Champion, very well written. Now I understand things happening here better. By the way, will Nidoking and Nidoqueen ever come back?

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    The plot is getting very thick... that Espeon scene was creepy. Love is zig-zagging between characters like a spider's web... and Rika is going on a trip with Roy. Nice.
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    Great chapter SM, Is the Absol important to the plot? I know Absol is the disater pokemon but is the Absol hurting Krystal and her pokemon going to change Chris' feeling Krys?
    Also I replied to the previous chapter but since you replied at the same time, you didn't answer it but I understand.
    I...Hate..Absol!

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    Oh dear. Indeed, Absol is not a good omen. We'll have to see what happens with this.

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    Very interesting......... I hope that Absol's attack will remind Chris and Krystal about their little......."moment" in Viridian Forest. I'm wondering what Chris plans to buy for Krystal.

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    Great chapter, Shiny! So, these are the teams right?

    Chris: Kecleon, Electabuzz, Umbreon, Pidgeotto, Bulbasaur, Seviper

    In Storage: Noctowl, Dustox, Weezing, Wobuffet, Smeargle

    Krystal: Marill, Charizard, Steelix, Espeon, Kingdra, Ampharos

    In Storage: None

    The Espeon scene was beautifully written, but creepy. Oh well, I like creepy stuff. Wow, Rika defeated Thomas, I wonder how Molly's match is gonna go? Absol... hmm... poor Krystal and Marill, I wonder if Chris is gonna catch Absol? If he sends it to storage, I wonder if Wobuffet will make friends with it and order it to "injure" some old friends of his? *cough*DustoxSmeargle*cough*

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    I finally just caught up with the whole story. It took awhile to finish FRTC but atleast I didn't have to wait for TIR. I have to say great job. I hope Chris catches Absol as it is one of my favorite Hoenn pokemon. Keep up the good work lol

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    cool!!! Espion seemed to go kinda psyco for a minute there, but that last thing she said to Umbreon...
    “ I tried to warn her, I really did ” Espeon purred.
    leaves a kinda ominous feeling around you. ooo, Absol... sounds like a pretty good addition to a team...*hint, hint* Ampharos seems to have changed a bit, like when Charmander evolved into Charmelion in the show, only it has turned into a prankster! cant wait 4 the next chapter!!!

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    Hey guys. I was in the school Library, put some books in the teachers bag and laughed as he set the alarm off....until i got caught Now i'm in an after school detention and at my own risk, i'm quickly coming on.

    Firstly, Hanada, Espeon is with Kimi.

    The Nido's won't make a return, Dragon_Claw,

    and thats it really. I'd reply in depth but i can't! See ya later guys

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    Hey SM!

    Its a pity you got caught, and dont get caught again on our account.

    To the chapter:
    Espeon's feature was weird, and my suspicion may be on the right track!!!!

    Ya Rika!!!!! She won - again!

    Absol - to be honest, its not my fave poke, and it feels a bit too 'higher level pokemon' to be on a team such as Chris'
    It'd be like catching a Latios in my eyes.

    Fuchsia City, eh? The climax im guessing before the Articuno finding.

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    Good chapter, Absol, hmm, what to think, three options
    Owned by evil trainer
    Chris catches it
    Chris defeats it
    It runs away
    Kills Krystal, wait that would not happen quite.yet

    And for Espeon, although the whole incident IMO was a just a quick foreshadowing, but Chris may catch it and it will just hate Krystal still. And if anyone was listening I think there will be an 8 limit pokemon thingy mobber.

    The battle with Tom, whom I think will be important character and may be the one who gets a Swablu. I am not sure abou this. And for SM, naughty you, but who cares a detention big whoop, cops come to my place plenty of times for stupider reasons, like sitting in a lawn chair on the side of the road staring into a sercruity camera pointed at my house.

    Sorry if I spoiled some of this story for you.
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    Hey! I'm back. Great Chapters. Keep up the good work.

    Having multiple viruses can really suck.

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    Just wondering Shiny, will you be having a major 'end-of-fic battle' with our two heroes battling with eight pokemon each, against themselves OR James???????????????

    Speaking of getting into trouble, i was chosen as a helper for the supervisors in our school for the Leaving Cert (i think its the equivilant of a-levels in UK Shiny.) Anyways, me and my friend (Marion Garvey if anyone from our locality is reading), took out the normal sugar from the bowl and replaced it with salt, icing sugar and caster sugar mixed together. It was soo funny, and we *almost* got caught.

    And on a totally unrelated note, does anyone else love Charmed. You know - the programme about the three witches Paige, Piper and Pheobe?
    Im totally obsessed with it....
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    What i wouldn't do for the affections of Rose Mcgowan, Holly Marie Combs and Alyssa Milano..........

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    Thought I'd tell you that I'm going to France for two weeks so I can't read the next four chapters (why did I have to go exactly at an exciting moment???) until later... I'm not gone.
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    Oakbark: Lol, i'll be good! It was an hour after school :--/ i got my pocket money banned for a few weeks...DAMNIT! PM-ing me with your suspicion would really be appreciated, i love hearing how you interpret the fic! Rika won again, with Roy's useless Ditto and his reliable Gengar. Remember him in Chapter 34? He was really strong back then....ho-hum. Absol is really powerful, as you'll see in Chapter 28 below, and weather or not he is caught is another matter. Articuno....lol, 'that thing' the fic is loosely based on. You'll find out about him soon, hehe. Something happens.

    Powarun: That was 5 options :-P It's true, those are the options, although there are more obviously, one inparticular you wouldn't expect. Fpreshadowing indeed, but it is also a gateway into Espeon's feelings and how she reacted to being left with Kimi. Tom's my best mate, he's the best! cool guy, really is. I wish he went here on TPM, i wish he liked Pokemon really, because then I wouldn't have to hide this from him :-(. Oh well. Swablu for Tom? he may already have one, if he owns a Gym. Hmm, keep guessin and all will be revealled.

    TSS: Hey again, thanks. I hate viruses. Oh well, just get a Porygon2 to kill them off, that might help!

    Oakbark: Nice question. Well, the end is slowly being set in stone as to what happens - I'm really very proud of the ideas i've churned out. Krystal may not catch anymore Pokemon, you have to see that, although she may...if i want to introduce any dragons, that is! James? lol, he STILL hasn't been written in, but I'm trying to, I really am! Hehe. Soon, soon he will appear. :-)

    Dragonfree: Well, i hope you have a great time and don't miss us that much! we're not worth it! Hehe. Catch ya in 2 weeks mate.



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    The Indigo Road
    Chapter 28 - Fighters
    By Shiny

    Chris

    Umbreon raced forward and tackled Absol from Krystal’s body. He leapt back but kept his balance as he skidded along the grass. Umbreon stared at the terrifying wolf Pokemon, the rings glowing on his body.

    Absol howled, before focusing power into the blade on the side of his head. He leapt into the air and swung his head around, releasing a blade of energy forward at Umbreon. Umbreon shot to the left as the energy scarred the ground.

    “Come on, guys” I croaked. “Seviper, poison fang! Electabuzz, focus a Thunderpunch”

    Electabuzz thought hard, focusing his energy into his right hand. It crackled violently as he thrust it towards Absol. However, the speedy Pokemon leapt into the air and evaded the attack, before firing a blade of energy again and smacking Electabuzz in the stomach.

    Seviper lunged at Absol and sunk his deep red fangs into Absol’s ribcage. He howled in pain as Seviper swung Absol to the left, making the wolf graze across the floor. I stood there, watching the action from afar. Kecleon stood by my side, transfixed, while Pidgeotto pecked at some seeds on the ground.

    I ran over to Krystal and picked her up. She opened her eyes wearily.
    “…Chris?” She asked.
    “How are you?” I asked her. “You look bad”

    “Get me….” She began.
    “Get you what?” I asked quickly.
    “Get me help…” She breathed, falling down.

    “KRYSTAL!” I cried. I looked around wildly. What could I do? Electabuzz, Umbreon and Seviper were panting heavily after the adrenaline rush. I looked around, walking over to my scooter and standing it up.

    “Ok, I want you five to STAY HERE and protect Krystal” I began. “Get Ampharos and Charizard, too”

    Kecleon released Ampharos and Charizard, and the 7 Pokemon stood around Marill and Krystal. Absol lay in the ground, gasping slightly. I pushed off from my scooter and towards Fliscoula City, looking for help.

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    “Is she alright?” Kecleon asked nervously. “Krystal, I mean”
    Charizard looked down at his trainer: he was Krystal’s first capture, and he had held that title with pride. He had often held a macho image, but if the truth were to be spoken, then he was worried. Very worried for his trainer.

    “She’ll be fine” Charizard huffed. “Now, Myself, ‘Buzz and Kecleon will be attacking anything that comes near. The rest of you will be circling Krystal and Marill, making sure you attack anything that comes near. Put simply: WE go forward to attack, you attack anything that goes forward”

    As the biggest and probably physically strongest Pokemon, Charizard seemed to be taking a lead role in all of this. Ampharos seemed to have respect for his friend, but his new size and capabilities had given the impression he was willing to be a leader, too.

    Seviper, Umbreon, Ampharos and Pidgeotto formed a ‘circle’ around Krystal’s body. Charizard, Electabuzz and Kecleon walked forward and prepared to attack anything. Ampharos, however, was looking at Absol with a confused expression. Absol looked up at Ampharos, and started to speak…

    “You should have caught me while you had the chance”

    Within seconds, he launched himself at Ampharos and clung to his upper body. Ampharos screamed and stumbled around as Absol created a gash on Ampharos’ body.

    “Haha! Take that!” Absol cried manically.

    Electabuzz send a surge of electric energy down to his fist, before racing forward, roaring his name and smashing Absol in the face. Howling, the white and grey Pokemon flew back and smacked against the floor. Ampharos stumbled slightly, but Electabuzz managed to support him.

    “Are you…all right?” Electabuzz asked. Far from it being him who was the ‘caring one’, this situation had really meant all Pokemon stuck together, looked out for one another, and fought for Krystal no matter what.

    “Yea…” Ampharos muttered, nodding awkwardly. Electabuzz settled him down with Krystal.

    The Pokemon looked around. Umbreon walked to Charizard.

    “Should we catch him now?” He asked nervously.
    “I’m not sure,” Charizard grunted. “Catching him would only mean we’d have to keep him, wouldn’t it?”

    “I suppose so” Umbreon muttered, slightly ashamed of his idea.
    “But” Charizard went on. “If we do not catch him, then we can only guess what he’ll do next”

    Kecleon ran up to Krystal and got an Ultra Ball from her belt. He then ran over to Charizard and handed it to him. Charizard prepared to throw the ball at Absol, when he froze on the spot.

    “Can you…hear that?” He asked the group. A series of howls rose up from the surrounding forest. “It could be more of them”

    “Pidgeotto, you can go and check” Kecleon advised. Pidgeotto looked up from the sand he was kicking.
    “No”

    Angered, Charizard walked up to Pidgeotto and grabbed him:
    “If you’re in this group, then you’ll fight for your friends, help your friends and even put yourself before your friends”

    “My friends are all on Route01” Pidgeotto rasped. “I’d fight for THEM any day”
    “You’re in THIS group now” Electabuzz said boldly, getting up from talking to Ampharos. “Your priorities lie here now”

    “Well then, Ok, I will look” Pidgeotto snapped. He ran, spreading his wings and flapping them hectically, before swooping up into the air and going towards the forest. However, another Absol leapt through the bushes and landed on Pidgeotto, pinning him to the ground and biting his left wing. He screeched loudly, as the rest of the group stared I disbelief.

    “PIDGEOTTO!” Kecleon cried. He eyed the Absol and charged at it with his claws. “YOU BASTARD!”

    Kecleon slashed Absol across the back, but he bucked his back legs and sent Kecleon flying through the air. The chameleon smacked against the floor and lay there, breathing deeply, a gash on his back.

    “Come on guys” Electabuzz said. “Me and Charizard will take on these two –

    “What do you mean… two ?” Absol said, chuckling. Three more Absol leapt from the bushes and bombarded the Pokemon. Charizard and Electabuzz were currently battling Absol, but Umbreon was now squaring off against a rather bulky one. Seviper had to take on two at a time, which was looking rather grim.

    Charizard opened his mouth and blasted a torrent of flames at Absol. He screamed as the flames engulfed his body menacingly, running wildly around the path between Celadon and Fliscoula.

    “Come on, Chris” Electabuzz gasped, smacking Absol in the face. Absol then sunk his teeth into Electabuzz’ knuckles. He roared in pain.

    Kecleon lay there, as did Marill, Pidgeotto and Ampharos. Charizard, Umbreon, Electabuzz and Seviper battled to the max against the ferocious Absol, waiting for some help from their trainer.

    *

    Megan

    “I’m sure you’ll be let free soon,” I told Sabrina, who was pale, shaky and rather paranoid at the time. “You gave Jet the keys to the Gym, and the takeover won’t take long, so we can only wait”

    “But…but I don’t want to go” Sabrina whimpered.
    “It’ll be fine” I assured her, assuring being something I did an awful lot recently. I got a buzz on my pager:

    “Megan – Gym doors opened, we’re in! Come visit us, JH has Promo’s for us. Luv Jet”
    I presumed JH was James Holmes. Our Promo Pokemon were in! A new friend for me…I sighed happily, putting my pager away.

    “Well, I have to go” I told Sabrina. “We’ll probably be taking you tomorrow, or the day after”

    “Please!” Sabrina cried. “PLEASE!”
    “I’m sorry,” I said, walking down the staircase.

    I wandered through the City of Saffron: The heat had died down after the Saffron bomb, but Police officers were still patrolling a lot more than before. Jet the Gym Leader…he had always dreamed of making a name for himself…

    I arrived at the Gym, and went inside. Inside, I saw the long arena, and Jet, as well as about 5 Grunts.

    “Hey Meg” Jet said, walking over. “Like the Gym?”
    “Are you refurbishing it?” I asked keenly.
    “We will be, but we can’t just yet” Jet said. “Officials have been told of the new Gym Ownership, but if we change it straight away they may get suspicious”

    “Yea” I said emptily. “So, you said our Promo Pokemon were here?”
    “Yup” Jet said. “Well, as I said, I’m keeping Magmar, but yours is right here”
    Jet handed me a Violet Pokeball with a yellow star on the front. I smiled, taking it off him and throwing it out into the Gym.

    The ball opened and released a blob of white light, white light that slowly took the form of a purple shell. I looked down at it. It was shut.

    Suddenly, as I bent down to inspect, its hinge opened, a big red tongue flopped out and it rasped “Shellda!”

    “Shellder?” I questioned. Its actual body must be the black part inside, I thought. Shellder was a pretty cool Pokemon. “Try an Ice beam!”

    I pointed at Simon, a grunt with a Shroomish. Shellder once again opened her mouth, and from her black body, she blasted a pearly white beam. It was smooth, with a hint of sky blue as it hurtled towards the grumpy, dumpy Mushroom.

    The beam made contact, and Shroomish soon became encased in a block of ice. His expression was rather fixed as he stared into the nothingness ahead of him. Simon turned around.

    “What was that for?” He asked hotly.
    “Cool off” I snapped. “Clamp!”

    Shellder rocked slightly, before launching herself forward at Simon. She shut her shell over his shoe, clamping onto his foot. Simon tried to shake her off by swinging his leg up and down. Shellder stayed on.

    “So, are you pleased?” Jet asked.
    “Yea! She’s great,” I said happily. “When…when are we leaving?”
    “Maybe four days time?” Jet said. “At most, that is. Four days at most. I need legal papers sorted and whatnot”

    Jet then took me to the back of the Gym and through a door. Once there, I saw a large plane, silver in colour.

    “The same ones they use for parachute dives” Jet explained.
    “This is what we’re leaving in, ey?” I said, moving my hand across it. “What’s happening then?”

    “I managed to persuade Smokey to pilot for us,” Jet said. Smokey was this Rocket we knew who had a Numel. He was a good trainer, but his pyromaniac antics had often got him suspended from work. He was one of a large selection of pilots on the Rocket Force, as was Domino. She was in Pewter City, however, taking over the Gym.

    “We’re flying over Oldale” Jet told me. “It’s a nice town in another continent. There’s a forest nearby you can drop from –

    “DROP?” I questioned.
    “Yea, Parachute drop out the plane” Jet told me obviously. “You’ll safely land in the woods, and you can get to Oldale”

    “Sounds good” I began. “I’d better change out of my rocket uniform before we leave!”
    “Yea, but I’d spend the next few days training Shellder. She’s strong, but just train that extra bit,” Jet advised.

    “Thanks” I said, kissing Jet on the cheek. “Thanks so much”
    “It’s Ok” Jet assured me. “It’ll be sad seeing you go, but…but I know I’m doing the right thing here”

    I hugged him, before running off to train my new Shellder.

    *

    Al

    “Run away?” I questioned. Monica nodded.
    “My dad owns an 18-wheeler; we can use that to get to Fuchsia!” She said enthusiastically.

    “Are you sure that’s safe?” I asked. “I’m one year off taking my driving test, and you’re only 14!”
    “Oh, stop whining” Monica said hotly. “We have to keep on the run, in case Sandra catches you!”

    She had a point.

    “Yea…yea, you’re right,” I said, hugging her. “You’re very special to me, you know”
    “Thanks, I feel the same” Monica told me.

    And with that, Monica ran down the road, presumably towards her father’s 18-wheeler. I hoped he wasn’t a steel adept with giant metal fists or something. Or some big dude with tattoos. I did hope, however, that he was a weedy little man with glasses…

    I stared in disbelief at the huge truck. It was red, rather bulky and looked MASSIVE. Monica clambered in with no problem, but it took me a while to boost up into the truck.

    Inside, it was very warm. The chairs were big and comfy, but the steering wheel was about the size of a dustbin lid! Monica gripped the wheel confidently, and slammed her foot down on the accelerator.

    As he tore out the peaceful Lavender Town, the one place where I’d felt secure and at home, a large cloud of black exhaust trailed after us. I felt guilty: from an adults perspective it may look as if I had kidnapped Poor Monica, but I had to say, it was much rather the other way round. We drove south towards Fuchsia, where Monica’s Soul Badge lay. Once there, we’d escape somewhere else. I heard Fuchsia was by the sea…maybe we could get a boat…

    *

    Tony

    “Keep going!”

    We ran across the maze in the dim light. Misty and I hissed across to each other where to go: right now, we had just nipped straight across a 4-way turn in Dave’s maze. I felt my heart smash against my body through every beat it gave off. Dave really had this planned.

    Misty, who was infront of me, stopped. Staryu, her only Pokemon with her, stood still too.

    “What’s up?” I asked.
    “I can hear something,” She hissed. I stopped, and tried to listen. As I listened, a thick slither could be heard from somewhere nearby.
    “I hear it too” I assured her.

    “What can we do? It sounds like a Pokemon,” She said.
    “You attack if it comes infront, I’ll attack if it comes behind” I said to her. She nodded, gathering her wits and turning.

    “AIIIYEEEEEEEEEEE!” She screamed, pointing. I turned, and saw a humongous Bronze Steelix staring at us. It cocked its head slightly, but then forced it down at Misty. I grabbed her delicate frame and pulled her back as Steelix smashed the floor.

    We both breathed in quick spurts. Misty had her hand to her chest as her other hand kept Staryu close.

    “We’ll go back to the 4-way and take the right path,” I said to her. She nodded, as we both turned on our heels and pelted down the maze’s path. Steelix followed, although rather delayed, as it had to un-jam its head from the floor.

    As we came to the 4-way path, we darted down what was the right path and followed it as it turned left, right, right, left, forward. We ran on evermore, the path being totally straight, and it looked as if it would stay like that for a lot longer.

    As we turned left, we ran down a small straight and turned right, before the path opened up and revealed…

    “The arena!” Misty cried. She ran onto it: it was cement, with engravings in. “What happened to it?”
    “He’s changed it. Changed it for his own uses” I muttered. Misty got her key for her room and ran up the stairs. Once there, she slotted the key in and accessed her bedroom.

    While Misty freshened up, (I didn’t need to), I got all my Pokeballs (except Seaking’s) and attached them to my Pokeball belt. It felt good having them there. However, as I examined the arena, I felt someone grab me by the back of the neck. I turned, and saw Dave standing with Blastoise.

    “Welcome home, Aquadox” He snapped.
    “Hey DAVE” I snapped.
    “How you been? Living in fear?” Dave sneered.

    “Not any more” I told him. “What’s this about?”
    “It’s MY new Gym” Dave said. “In thirty minutes I will be the Cerulean Gym Leader, so I refurbished this as part of The Gym Plan”

    “The Gym Plan?” I asked.
    “Never mind” Dave uttered. “The point is, this Gym will be mine in thirty minutes!”

    I heard a sharp noise, and saw Dave clasp his arm on pain. I looked up to see Misty in her swimsuit, white jacket over it and her short ginger hair curving out at the ends. She held a pistol in her hand.

    “It’s only a pellet,” She snapped. “But LAY OFF HIM”
    Dave stepped back, and I walked to the left a little.

    “Dave, we’re taking you on in the last 30 minutes we have” Misty told Dave. “We’re going for an all-out dogfight for the ownership of this Gym, so watch out”

    Dave stared at her. He plucked a Pokeball from his belt and maximised it.

    “Bring it on, *****”














    Chapter 29 - Tears of Hope
    Posted on Thursday

    -Chris, after suffering a lot in the forest, meets another trainer in Fliscoula City. And it just so happens he's into Dragon Taming...
    “Oh, I see. I got to the semi-finals of the Miami League, but lost to a girl named Rika” I explained.
    “She beat me, too” Thomas said. “She’s very strong. Oh, I’m Tom, Tom Chambers”

    “Chris Haruka” I said, shaking Tom’s hand.


    -In the Pokemoncenter, both trainers hear some good news...
    “With the recent Saffron City explosion, the Devon Corporation heist and petty vandalism up 80%, the future looks grim. People need more protection on these streets we walk, which is why I will declare that Pokeball belts are to be sold holding eight balls. HOWEVER, League matches will resume as 6-6, but Gyms unofficial or registered may hold 8-8 bouts”

    -Wobbuffet collects his fears and takes on Smeargle:
    “Noctowl! Help me!” I shouted. I then heard a coo, as Noctowl clasped his talons on Smeargle’s head. Staring fiercely, Noctowl hurled Smeargle into a primrose bush. Dustox, shocked at this, fluttered off to find Weezing. I smiled at Noctowl.

    So come online on Thursday to see all this and more! How much chocolate can YOU get for £10?

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    Guess, I missed an important one, war with reincruitements. Oh well I tried. No one but Dave should die, and making a pokemon die is not right, watch out Marril, something may get you. Poor Krystal, and Megan, she really needs to get a better life in Oldale. The misty part was cool, and it fits her anime likeness, with anger and all. It was a good chapter can not wait till thursday
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    Woah. So much going on. I never would've expected Misty to battle Dave herself. This will be an interesting battle. Everything's culminating in Fuschia, we'll see what happens there, too.

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    Those Absol are out of control! Misty should have pulled a real pistol on Dave and shot the bastard dead right there! This is getting even more interesting!

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    Brilliant chapter!
    This fic is the only ties i have got left with the world of pokemon, so you should realise how good it must be to keep me interested.

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    Wow, great chapter!

    Hmm, Pidgeotto is evil, LOL, but it did sacrifice itself for Krystal and Marill. Electabuzz is strong, but that Absol is too. Wow, there's nobody left, I wonder if Charizard, Electabuzz, and Seviper can fight them off?

    So Megan has a Shellder? Wow, sounds good! That's a nice underused Pokemon that you don't see everyday!

    So Al and Monica are going to Fuchsia? Heh, I wonder how this all plays out...

    And Tony versus Dave, I wonder who will win. Heh...

    Keep it up!

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    Excellent! I hope Krystal is okay... One question, why doesn't Tony attach Seaking to his belt???

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    Great chapter SM, Dave deserves to die and Misty should whup his *** but I have a feeling she might lose.
    Also, this chapter has a third person view with the pokemon talking to each other, I prefer First Person but the third person view bit was a nice change from all the first person views of the characters.

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    The Silver Storm: Dave remodeled the inside of the Gym where there wasn't a pool. Seaking can't battle on land.

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    replies are really coming thick....*takes deep breath* Lets's sort this out!

    Powarun: Well as i mentioned, deaths are plotted out, I hope you enjoy (well, wrong word....) I hope you APPRECIATE the deaths there are. Or maybe there's only one? Megan should do fine in Oldale, let's hope!

    Jukain: Yea, It's really where everything ties up and where the conflicts start. Misty & Tony VS Dave....can they battle him, let alone beat him? The Gym hangs in suspense, I just hope they can do it! Maybe we can get spotlight for some of Tony's Pokemon...but who will Dave use?

    Raichu: It was a real pistol, but loaded with pellets. Maybe not ALL pellets, but pellets indeed. When you say pellets three times like I just did, the word makes NO sense The Absol are wreckless, I hope they keep Krystal alive...

    Oakbark: Me and you both. As I'm writing Chapter 35, about to start 36, I can guess 38 Chapters for the fics length. Short? Long? Maybe both or neither, but I've kept you all hanging along the way.

    Hanada: Pidgeotto better get his act together, he really does nothing for the group. Do you think he'll ever change? I was in a Shellder mood when I decided Megan's Promo Pokemon...so Megan has Shellder, Domino got a Magneton and Sandra got a Sableye. Neat. Sableye makes a return, by the way...
    Al and Monica are indeed whisked away to Fuchsia, I hope I don't disapoint! Remember Tony AND Misty are against Dave.

    TSS: As Rai pointed out:
    1) There is no water.
    2) He has a 6-Pokemon belt, and 7 Pokemon.
    Krystal will hopefully pull through...*crosses fingers*

    Jon:
    Misty: LOSE? ME? I'M ALL POWERFUL!
    Tony:: Heh...take the RED PILL, Misty. The RED PILL...

    Well, It was in 3rd person because I didn't want to opinionise (is that a word?) the scene through varius Pokemons eyes. Kecleon telling that was going to be an option, but i didn't. I prefer 1st, too.

    Rai: Good job. Well, he cemented OVER the pool, there MAY be water underneath....

    I'm finishing Chapter 35 - Bag me one, which is ELEVEN PAGES! Geez...its very important and stuff, so i hope you enjoy. Chapter 36 will feature Weezing.....yay!?!, as well as housing an emotional scene for Chris. Let's hope whatever happens goes well...*bites lip in nervousnessnessness*

    ps: I GOT DRUMS! YAY! *Plays drums*

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    Hey Kec, The seconds point makes more sense. (I never knew he had seven pokemon still. Didn't he have a total of eight after he added Ekans????Just wondering) Also just because a gym floor is cemented over doesn't mean that you don't have a fish in your party though.

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    38 chapters?
    Sounds about fitting for this fic, as the chapters are longer and better, and there's no compulsory badge-collecting.

    Me and Marion, my friend, are experimenting with different things to 'poison' the exam supervisors with. We make the coffee for them in the Cookery Room so we have access to curry powder, salt and the like. Ever put over five heaped teaspoons of Nescafe powder into a mug to make coffee? Trust me - the thing is overpoweringly strong, and so is the smell. Lucky we're not the ones drinking it!!!!!

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    evil Absol!!! i hope Krystal is ok. Pidgeoto seems not to be such good a pokemon nowadays, does it? i wonder if it was just going to fly off anyway?... hmm... r u still doing the thing where we can ask the charachters questions? if so, here's one for Pidgeoto: why are u acting so jerkish and not being part of the team? Was it something traumatic from your past, something Chris did, or is that just the way u r? hehe, Al and Monica are running off to Fuchsia, and right when everyone else is going there... what is going on there anyway? ooo, 8 pokemon per battle!!! mmmmm...
    so, only 38 chapters, huh? thats a pretty good length, but nowhere near as long as the first part. but im sure that this will turn out to be an xtremely good fic!
    neway, keep up the good work!!!

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    TSS: Tony grabbed his Pokemon for protection, and since Seaking wouldn't be much use on land, he didn't pick it up. Ekans and Mudkip were slaughtered by Dave.

    Oakbark: Yea, less badges to be collected really. Chris just hasn't bothered, he's training. Oh foo. Nvermind, and i'm glad you stir up trouble every now and then!

    Ultra: Absol are evil Pokemon alright.
    Pidgeotto: Why am I like this? Because i was kidnapped from Route01, trained extensively against an angry wolf and many other Pokemon, and owned by an idiot. THATS WHY. But...if I weren't so arrogant I might have been able to help Krystal...

    I guess FRTC was so long because we had pointless chapters like the Shroomish chapter and many more I've forgotten :-P There were 10 Gyms, two people to go to each, whereas this has 8 gyms, not all are visited and only one person battles.


    Well, Chapter 36 is being written, named 'Weezing's Indigo Debut', which is the match in Fuchsia. Here's a wee extract:

    “Let’s attack! String shot Ariados” Koga called.
    “Aria” The Pokemon clicked. It blasted a sticky thread from its mouth at Kecleon.

    “Safeguard” I shouted. Kecleon held his hands infront of him, and a large white bubble arched over him. The string shot covered and spread across the bubble, leaving Kecleon stuck, in a sense.

    “Kecleon, destroy the safeguard with a thunderbolt” I said. As his stripe brimmed yellow, sparks shot off. Kecleon blasted the attack from his body and shattered the safeguard, causing it to slowly disappear. Kecleon then shot his tongue from his mouth and licked Ariados across the face. Shuddering, Ariados started to crawl back slightly.


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    Now you sound like me, criticizing your own fic. Oh well, it happens to everyone. I really liked the original FRTC more than this one. Not that this one isn't good, I just liked the original more. Something is lacking here, and I'm not sure what it is.

    And now, the thrashing of self because I criticized an author who is obviously better than me. *beats self up*

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    Jukain: Sequels are hard, they always feel slightly 2nd hand because the characters are being reused and whatnot. I feel like writing more Islands for the original 3, but i can't...theyre on land. Oh well. Thanks for the feedback.





    The Indigo Road
    Chapter 29 - Tears of Hope
    By Shiny

    Chris

    “Come on” I told myself, as the ambulance raced through the forest. After informing Fliscoula City Hospital of Krystal’s condition, they dispatched an ambulance straight away. I was with a paramedic in the back, while two drove. A Chansey sat with ‘Steve’ the paramedic and me.

    “You say she was around here?” The navigator asked.
    “Yes, that’s right” I said silently. They drove on more, until the man slammed the brakes on.

    “Bloody hell” He exclaimed. “Look at this!”
    As he stopped, I looked to see about five or six Absol attacking a group of Pokemon – our Pokemon! Seviper was slapping one with his iron tail, Charizard conjured a fireball and hurled it, Umbreon was seen blasting a swift at one, and Electabuzz and a weary Ampharos blasted thundershock’s forward. Pidgeotto, Kecleon and Marill lay on the ground, as did Krystal.

    “Those are our Pokemon,” I explained. “Excuse me”
    I leapt from the ambulance and ran towards Kecleon. I picked him up, and he managed to smile weakly. He had a large gash on his back, and as I examined Pidgeotto, I saw he had a badly injured wing.

    “KECLEON! PIDGEOTTO!” I cried, picking Pidgeotto up. “PLEASE! WAKE UP!”
    The Paramedic and his Chansey walked over.
    “We’ll call for a Pokemoncenter Ambulance,” He said. “Please, wait here with the Pokemon while we take Krystal”

    “Can I not go with Krystal?” I asked.
    “Well, I think its best if you get these Pokemon checked out” The Paramedic said, examining Ampharos’ bruises. “There’s an ambulance on the way”

    I recalled Charizard; he seemed all right, but I assured him he did an amazing job. Electabuzz and Umbreon had minor injuries, but Seviper was a-ok. I recalled him and sat down, waiting for the next ambulance.

    “I’ll visit Krystal later” I told the Paramedic as he drove Krystal away from me. “Bye…”

    The minutes slipped by, and soon enough the Pokemoncenter’s Ambulance drove onto the scene. I helped load Ampharos onto the stretcher, but Electabuzz sat on the seat inside the ambulance. Umbreon was on the floor, and Pidgeotto, Marill and Kecleon were in separate Ambulances. I went into Kecleon’s as we drove off towards Fliscoula City.

    *

    I pressed my face against the glass. Kecleon lay there, Pidgeotto lay there, and Umbreon, Electabuzz and Ampharos lay there. I sniffed as I thought about what had just happened. Almost my whole team out. I couldn’t believe it. And Krystal…I think Marill was still being treated in Intense Intensive Care, but she’d be out soon, I think. I sighed heavily. Bulbasaur and Seviper on my team: that was it. I felt so lonely without Kecleon…or Krystal…

    Fliscoula was a very oriental city with pagoda’s and oriental, Japanese buildings. People wore special dress gowns called Kimono’s when they went out for special occasions, and a lot of people, I noticed, had black hair.

    I released Bulbasaur and together we wandered the streets. It was dark, but paper lanterns decorated the street and lit it up. Streetlights were in fact put inside wooden structures about 6 feet high, which fitted in with the whole theme of Fliscoula.

    I went to ‘Tai’s Noodle Bar’ in the heart of town and ordered some chicken noodles. An oriental food, with a slightly meaty zing to it. To be frank, I wasn’t keen on ordering Qwilfish scales; they were supposed to be highly toxic, despite being a delicacy.

    I sat at the bar as my dish slowly revolved around on the nice conveyor belt. A Japanese lady (whose name badge read ‘Anya’) stood behind the counter cleaning glasses, singing to herself. The dishes had number cards on them, and when they came past your seat you took them off the revolver. How quaint. If they only introduced these things at McDonalds…

    My noodles were somewhat complicated to eat with chopsticks. I kept fumbling around desperately; all the while wishing I had a fork, and ended up dropping them on the floor.

    The doors opened, and I heard someone walk in. Meanwhile, I picked up my grubby chopstick and wiped it on my t-shirt. The figure was a kid, about my age, with bleached hair. It was gelled so hard that it made the hair look crunchy, sort of like straw. It was a deep brown underneath the bleached parts. He had a navy blue hoody on, with a Pokeball on the back, and wore black baggy jeans.

    “Hello, Mr Thomas” Anya spoke, as Thomas sat next to me.
    “Hey” He said.
    “How was big Island tournament?” Anya asked keenly, almost unable to get the words out.

    “I lost to the Champion” Thomas began. “But I did get a lot of good experience. Most my team are back at home. I’m off duty at the Gym today, but I’ll be back there tomorrow”

    “The Gym?” I blurted out. “You’re a Gym Leader?”
    Thomas chuckled.
    “Not quite” He began. “I own an unofficial Gym in the city, but I’ve been in the Miami Islands to do some training”

    “Oh, I see. I got to the semi-finals of the Miami League, but lost to a girl named Rika” I explained.
    “She beat me, too” Thomas said. “She’s very strong. Oh, I’m Tom, Tom Chambers”

    “Chris Haruka” I said, shaking Tom’s hand.

    Over our meal, I explained about the snow in Pontaricò, Catcalina and other Miami Islands, and how Articuno had flown to Seafoam Islands. I told him about how Krystal and myself were going to research Articuno in Fuchsia City, and flush him out to stop the snow.

    “But how will Articuno get rid of the snow?” Tom asked keenly.
    “Well, sources say He knows an attack called Morning Sun, which can melt away sun and welcome spring into the world. If he can use that, then we’re ok”

    “So, where is this ‘Krystal’ you’ve been talking about?” Tom asked.
    After that query, I explained about the Absol and how they attacked us. Tom nodded in agreement.

    “They’re from Lightening Ridge” He said. “I never expected so many to attack you, though”

    Tom and Me talked even after our meal was finished. I learnt that he was from Fliscoula, and his divorced Mother lived in the city with his older brother Andrew. He was also training for Dragons Rock, and set up his unofficial Gym to get some recognition and reputation.

    And for being a dragon Tamer, Tom had a team of Salmenace, Gyrados, Arcanine and Rhydon for his team, but also had a Kangaskhan and a Cacturne, who didn’t battle as much.

    “Well, when Krystal’s out of Hospital then you can maybe battle her” I suggested. “She’d love that”

    “So would I” Tom said. “If you want, we can go back to my place and go on my Gamecube. You like Tony Hawks 4?”
    “Yea, I got it at home!” I said. “Ok then, lets go!”

    We left the restaurant and headed through the City. While Krystal was down and out, At least I could hang around with Tom! Two dragon tamers may be a lot to handle, but I’d like to think me and Tom could be really good mates.

    *

    Wobbuffet

    After talking to Noctowl in the big tree, he had advised me just to battle Smeargle. Have a little fight. I was up for it myself, and I’m sure he’d want to fight as well. Noctowl then fell asleep, rather suddenly I might add, leaving me to clamber down the tree and prepare.

    As I did, however, and made my way to the kitchen for Broccoli Ice cream, two figures stood in the doorway.

    “I can’t let you proceed, Mr Blobby” Smeargle declared, his arms folded. Dustox flapped his wings and nodded. “We are going to make sure you don’t cook again”

    Leaping forward, Smeargle aimed a body slam at me. I turned and elbowed him in the face, before rolling to the side to evade a psybeam from Dustox. I then folded my arms and focused a mirror coat as Smeargle fired a hydro pump.

    “Yes!” I cried, as it repelled and hit Dustox. “Take that!”
    Smeargle snarled and slapped me. I whimpered slightly, before using an encore on the bastard. He then started slapping the air as I stepped back from his attack. Dustox, who was now Smeargle’s underlining, had little to do, so he started fluttering over to the flowers.

    “Noctowl! Help me!” I shouted. I then heard a coo, as Noctowl clasped his talons on Smeargle’s head. Staring fiercely, Noctowl hurled Smeargle into a primrose bush. Dustox, shocked at this, fluttered off to find Weezing. I smiled at Noctowl.

    “You’ll get DOUBLE helpings of ice cream,” I told him.

    “Ouch…” Smeargle grumbled.
    “Learnt your lesson?” I sneered. “Is it good to be with the filth? It’s where you belong, you know”

    “Just…call it quits” Smeargle gasped. “Leave me alone”
    “Fine by me” I mumbled. I turned and headed for the kitchen, as Tim stepped out.

    “Smeargle?” He inquired. “Got some good news”
    I didn’t want to hear it. I wandered towards the kitchen, my real home, and began to boil the sugar salt mix, ready to serve it as soup. And I’d HAVE to get a nettle for the garnish…

    *

    Chris

    The next day, after a sleepover at Tom’s, we decided to go to his Gym, so I could see how things ran. However, as I visited Kecleon, Pidgeotto, Umbreon and Electabuzz, I heard a very important TV report:

    “Hello. I’m Chad Cuclux, and this is the news. The Pokemon League official Bertie Almonds has confirmed at a press conference the new legal Pokemon carrying limit has extended. Here’s Nina Nanar”

    The TV then showed an Asian woman with a very annoying name. Black short hair tied in a bun, a cream suit on and a red gem necklace; she stood infront of a park full of children.

    “Hello, I’m Nina Nanar. Bertie Almonds confirmed that Pokemon Trainers could now carry up to Eight Pokemon on their belts:”

    Bertie was then seen at a press conference. Round and chubby, he had a rather boisterous face, red and puffy, with a grey beard around his fat lips. He had glasses on, and began to speak:

    “With the recent Saffron City explosion, the Devon Corporation heist and vandalism up 80%, the future looks grim. People need more protection on these streets we walk, which is why I will declare that Pokeball belts are to be sold holding eight balls. HOWEVER, League matches will resume as 6-6, but Gyms unofficial or registered may hold 8-8 bouts”

    “So, with eight Pokemon allowed on your team, who will YOU choose?” Nina asked. “Nina Nanar, Fliscoula News”

    Oh man! Eight Pokemon? I rushed towards the videophone and rang home. Thomas followed, anxious to meet my family. Tim picked the phone up, and I could already see the same story on their TV.

    “Hey Chris” Tim said. “Heard the news?”
    “Yea!” I cried. “Can you send me two of my Pokemon?”
    “Erm…sure” Tim said. “Which ones?”
    “Well, Dustox, I haven’t really met him yet…” I began. Tim placed the ball on the pad and pushed the button. Within seconds, the ball appeared infront of me. The great ball. I can still remember when I captured Dustox as a Wurmple…

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    “Wow! It’s rare” Chris said, shutting his Pokedex. “Noctowl, go for a wing attack”
    Noctowl shot forward and gave Wurmple a large amount of damage. He shot a string shot but Noctowl used a whirlwind to blow it back.

    “Ok then! Great ball, GO!” Chris shouted, throwing the Pokeball. It hit Wurmple, and absorbed him in a flash of white light. The great ball landed softly on the ground and shook three times, before pinging to indicate a successful capture.


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    The good old days. Tim then began to speak.

    “And what else do you want?” He asked.
    “Erm…has Professor Oak sent you Smeargle back?” I asked.
    “Yea, yea he has” Tim responded.
    “Can you send him, then?” I asked. Tim nodded. He put the phone down, and got Smeargle’s orange Pokeball, before running around to find the creative young Beagle.

    Smeargle was seen dashing across the screen, Tim soon after him. Smeargle then showed up on the screen and picked up the phone.

    “SMEARGLE!!!!” He barked. He smacked himself over the head with the phone, before running off. Tim gave chase, eventually using his little Cyndaquil to tackle Smeargle. The beagle fell down, giving Tim time to recall him into the Orange and white Pokeball.

    “Here you go” He said, teleporting the ball. I received it, admired it and picked it up. As my belt could fit 6 Pokeballs on, I would have to buy a new one before I got Kecleon and Pidgeotto back.

    “Thanks” I said. I hung up.

    “So, ready to see two cool Pokemon?” I asked Tom.
    “Yea” He replied, grinning. I got the two balls and hurled them out, the light being released taking the form of Dustox and Smeargle.

    “Dustox!” The moth cried shrilly. He flapped straight at me and landed on my outstretched arm. He fluttered his wings, staring at me with deep eyes. Then, without any warning, he took off and flew circles around the Pokemoncenter, laughing hysterically.

    “Dustox!!!!!!!!” He shrieked. He landed in Tom’s face, causing him to splutter and try to swat the thing away. Smeargle, however, was busy attacking a little boy’s Raticate with his tail. The angry rat looked through the mass of green paint in his eyes, and raced forward.

    “Smeargle!” I shouted. Tom managed to get Dustox away from his face, the moth seemingly attracted to bright lights, but now Smeargle had caused a little scuffle with Raticate.

    Joyfully calling his name, Smeargle leapt high onto the desk of the Pokemoncenter and started firing bubbles from his tail. Raticate popped them all as he raced at my speedy dog, but Smeargle leapt into the air, performed a cartwheel, landed, and blasted an ember at Raticate.

    “Raticate! NO!” The boy cried, as his filthy sewer rat was engulfed in flames. Smeargle blasted a water gun and doused the flames. Either way, the little boy was in hysterics. I decided to take my new Pokemon out on the town for our new Pokeball belt.

    *

    So, we wandered through town, Dustox instantly shooting towards any bright lights, and Smeargle jumping up at anybody he saw. He reminded me of a newborn puppy, except this guy was really powerful, more so than anybody on my team.

    “Smeargle, stop!” I cried, as he leapt up on an old man. The man swatted his cane around to get the hyper Pokemon off, eventually thwacking him on the head. Smeargle collapsed in a heap on the floor. I watched him.

    “Return” I said, as Smeargle was returned into his Pokeball. The old man dusted off his pinstripe suit and got out a Pokeball.
    “Son, nobody leaps onto my suit and gets away with it,” He croaked.

    “Well, Smeargle did” I rasped. “And I don’t know why you’re telling me; I didn’t even jump up at you”

    “I choose you!” The man roared, throwing out his ball. It opened and revealed a healthy looking Nidorino. It reminded me of my old one, and I then thought to how he was doing on Trueman Farm. The Nidorino pawed the ground. I felt as if people used battling (IE: a beating up someone’s Pokemon) as an answer to ANYTHING these days…

    “Dustox, GO!” I cried, pointing at the Nidorino. Dustox looked over at me from the lantern he was attacking. I opened my bag and got out a torch, shining the beam on the ground. The moth perked up and fluttered towards the dot.

    I shone the torch in Nidorino’s eyes. “Headbutt!”

    Dustox shot forward and headbutted Nidorino, but Nidorino started racing around and bucked Dustox off. Angered, the poison moth fluttered into the air and prepared for another attack.

    “Try a psybeam!” I said. From his yellow eyes, my Dustox blasted a pinkish beam straight forward at Nidorino. Nidorino growled and leapt to the left as the beam smashed the ground. He then leapt up at Dustox, ferociously trying to joust him with his long, thin horn.

    “Keep back!” I cried, as Dustox flapped higher. “Go for a sleep powder and show them how we battle!”
    Dustox blasted his wings forward fast, causing a wind to pick up. A light blue powder was released into the air, which was sent towards Nidorino. He perked up, sniffing the toxic powder, before becoming woozy, stumbling from here to there.

    “Now! Psychic!” I roared. Dustox’ eyes glowed a fearful blue, as he wrapped Nidorino in the same glow. As Dustox shrieked his name shrilly, Nidorino screwed his eyes shut and endured the pain. Dustox then concentrated as he prepared to try levitation.

    “Come on! That’s it!” I cried, as Nidorino rose about half a foot off the ground. However, the glow stopped, and Dustox dropped Nidorino. Dustox, probably exhausted from trying that attack, started panting.

    “Tackle!” The man cried. Nidorino, recovering from the faint sleep powder and weak psychic attack, galloped forward and leapt into the air. He smacked into Dustox, causing him to fall down onto his back.

    “Good job, very good” The man said. “Now, stomp”
    Nidorino walked over to Dustox, who was at the moment wriggling and squirming. He forced his foot down, but Dustox managed to use a psychic to manipulate Nidorino’s foot. He then managed to throw Nidorino back, who shot back across the ground.

    “Dustox!” He cried, sprinkling a sleep powder over Nidorino.
    Nidorino sneezed, before starting to get drowsy. Dustox was already perfecting the attack, causing him to make it a lot stronger than it was before. Nidorino collapsed, labelling Dustox as the winner.

    “Return” The man said stiffly. He gave me a £10 note for winning, turned on his heel and walked off towards the dry cleaners.

    “So, what do you wanna do?” Tom asked.
    “I dunno really,” I said back. “Lets just look around town…how many bars of chocolate can I get with £10?”

    Laughing, my new mate and me walked off down the street, Dustox by my side.






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    Great battle with Dustox. Now Wobbuffet can prepare his suicide meals in peace. Yeah, I know, it's hard to continue that plot, but you did it real well.

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    Dustox seems really cool, what would happen if I fed it this fifty kilograms of Sugar. Laughs evilly. And Krystal better not be too hurt, maybe lost some limbs or something, but not killed. Do you think a Marril without a Tail would be able to swim? Liked this chapter, and Smeargle was saved from the brollivally ice cream. yuck. by the way wonder what is better Dustox's flying or my driving? TOday I can drive and for the rest of my life. ha ha.
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    Jukain: Heh, I liked Dustox' battle. He doesn't get many in, but be prepared for his 3-3 tag team with some other Pokemon in Fuchsia! Chapter 35 has a cool 2-2, Chris and Krystal against a loser with a Combusken, Cacnea and Shellgon. it's funny! He also has Surskit...hehe. I think this fic is much more seriosu if you know what I mean...it deals with love, death, betrayal, and watch out for Chapter 38...because Sandra makes her final appearence. Deadly.

    Powarun: Dustox is great, glad you all liked him! Krystal should be ok......I hope! Marill won't lose her tail, heh, funny if she got a prosthetic one glued on Smeargle was saved! Hoorah! Lol, he doesn't battle much really, but he'll make his mark! Driving? you're 17/18? :-o wow...lucky you!


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    What happened to the Absol? Were they scared away by the paramedics or the fighting Pokemon? Anyway, I'm ready to see Krystal revived again. I still want to see what Chris buys for her.......

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    Smeargle and Dustox....those two gangsters!!!!
    Poor old Wobb.....

    You really love bringing your friend into this, don't you?
    I wrote a ;o digimon ;o story years ago on paper with all my local friends, but then destroyed it in case they saw it......

    Oh, and i see that your advertising McDonalds instead of McRonalds now - what was it? the extra money???????
    ..........turncoat............

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    Well I am 16 and 3/4, or one half, and right now, I might be moving in a week month or months, so life has been hectic. I have a question for Krystal if you come around. "How will you feel if your hair is painted a dull black or a bright green, or putrid green?"

    Wobby are you upset that Smeargle can not your ice cream anymore.
    and would you rather be with Chris?

    Pidgeotto, did you learn your lesson why a team is better then independent in a war. or gangsta fight.
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    hehehe... Dustox just flows the beam of light!!! hmmmmm... this could have posibilities... *pulls out a laser pointer* awsome Powarun!! u can drive now huh? i cant wait, since ive only got about 3 more years (i'm 13). btw, just as a recap, how old is everyone here? im just wondering. Smeargle seems to be a bit hyper nowadays... *snicker* lousy old man. they always seem to carry pokemon that are pretty small and weak, like Nidoran or Meowth. speaking of chocolate, 10 pounds ( i cant make the sign with my keyboard) is about $16.69, and i know a place that sells candy bars for 40 cents, so i can get 41 candy bars with 29 cents left! (i got the currency converted at http://www.convertit.com/Go/Maps/Cur...rter_Input.ASP . very useful.) i hope Krystal gets ok, and Tom seems to be a pretty nice guy. anyway, with 8 pokemon at once, i could contruct my ultimate team!!! the only problem is that i need to think one up... uh, catch you guys later!

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    Wow, great chappie, I loved it!

    So, Krystal and all the other injured are in the hospital. What happened to Absol? I wanted someone to catch one. So, Chris met Tom; will Tom be the next Tony?

    Noctowl is on Wobuffet's side, they beat up Dustox and Smeargle, yay!

    So Chris withdrew his Dustox and Smeargle! That was a great battle, now Wobuffet, Weezing, and Noctowl are the only ones of Chris' Pokemon to be left at the estate.

    Great chapter!

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