Academy of Fighting and Magic

[Theraven]

Congratulations you have been chosen to attend the accademy of fighting and magic. This is a co-ed school and there is no dress code.

The classes are as follows:

Defense

Weapon Tactics

Magic

Summoning

Potions

Spirits

Figting History

Air Tactics

Language


You may choose 7 of those and in what order you want them. The enrollment form must be in the formation as follows.


Name
Grade
Description
Desired classes (in order)
Sex
Age
Attitude


The year will consit of 167 days. We look oward to you enrolling in the Academy! here there are grade 10 to 12.


Intro: Woosh, Marcus opened the mailbox door. "Hey whats this?" He found an envelope with fancy paper and writing. It was an application to attend an Academy of fighting and magic. Marcus took no time at all to read this letter. He went into his house and found a pen. He was so eager to attend this accademy. This is what he wrote. (That was the intro, now everybody just put there stats down.)

Name: Marcus Hunt
Grade: 10th
Description: Marcus is a good looking guy who gets good grades. He can aheive succes in school and still have time to joke around. He has brown hair and the girls all like him. he is very charming, and will never upset any body. Occasionaly he will get out of hand and become the class clown but that is very rare.
Desired classes: Defense, fighting Tactics, air Tactics, language, spirits, potions, Fighting history.
Sex: male
age: 16
Attitude: Marcus tries very hard in school. He also tries very hard with the ladies.

Now everybody just put down your stats and we will be able to start this rpg. Here is the basic plot of this rpg.

This school is as big as a castle. It has very nice classrooms, and very nice dormatories. All students will be sleeping in a designated dormitory. It may b co-ed if it is alright with the students parents. You will have homework in your dorms and it will be done for the next day. (P.S after every body sighns up, people will be able to choose a teacher name that they want for the teacer) Now i elaborated, soe everybody just post your characters now.

[Skyline127]

You need to show ppl that they need to sign up. there are sign up threads and Starting threads... Whats going on here? I am confused. Is there any plot? What happens after school hours? Do we have rooms? Elaborate...
Also...why the Hell would there be a dress code only on fridays? what color is the dress code. E-LAB-Or-ATE. Ther... I spelled it out for you.

[lugia_2000]

Uh, Raven, this is kinda not how you do an RPG...
Not only are they supposed to have some thought and basis of plot, but they're also supposed to be seperate from the sign up form. Ex, you make a sign up form w/ plot and then start it on a different form.
-_-"
I suggest you restart.

[MarillTogepi]

Hi there In an effort to save this RPG, you should click the little button below your post that says Edit, and add more content to this, like a longer plot. Describe the school? Why is there a dress code on Fridays? Maybe write descriptions for each class and give them teachers? It also seems that some classes can be divided into different fields of study within them ("Black Magic" could easily be divided into "Elemental Magic", "Summoning", "Illusions", and the like), and that a few classes may be taken to mean the same things ("Magic" and "Black Magic", for example).

Maybe give the Academy a name? "Academy of Fighting and Magic" just doesn't sound pleasing to the ears. Usually, academies have at least a name other than Academy, be they strange (Beauxbatons, of Harry Potter fame, is an Academy), or be they normal.