lol I would say "wtf", but I think that would be too nondescriptive as a question.
As of right now, I am wondering about the interaction of the RPG. Currently you just have us briefly gathered to talk to some old guy for a sec, and then we all seem to wake up at a random place, which you state is different for each character.
It would also be helpful if you give us more direction so we don't blindly dive into an RPG which we have no clue where its going. :p