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    Okay, so you may've heard some talk about Grey writing a webcomic. Well, that's true, as I'm Grey and I'm presently writing a webcomic. Well, me and some other people, but that's not important. What is important is how amazing it looks:

    -PAGE ONE-
    Goodwill Heroes


    -PAGE TWO-
    ...takatakatakak...


    Now I'm only planning on posting the first chapter or so, and that'll be one week at a time. After that, you leeches are gonna hafta go to the website (like normal folks) to get the Goodwill Heroes glory. Nevertheless, please enjoy the updates that're to come.
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    And now for pages three and four:

    -PAGE THREE-
    Second-String Superheroes


    -PAGE FOUR-
    Who Are These Jokers?
    -Grey

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    Wow, so many comments...:

    -PAGE FIVE-
    Shadoop.
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    -PAGE SIX-
    Not Owned.
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    Well, I would comment Grey, but I just don't get them =/

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    No worries, Melg, you tried your best. I can link you guys to the cast page just so you can get a feel for the characters.

    The first chapter's all a big fight scene anyway, which reminds me:


    -PAGE SEVEN-
    hiddly-diddly rig-pig
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    Is he singing Scatman? If he is, I then get the whole damn set of pages and it has turned hilarious.

    EDIT: Ok I can comment: I do like the drawing. We simply don't have an idea for the plot yet, so Its rough to throw real good comments out without having to more to go on. I most likely will keep reading long enough to get a feel for who these two are and why they're jumping into a ring of arms dealers and using neckties and hating behind the back approaches.

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    Just had a read. While it's utterly mental, and some of it's gone over my head, I kind of like the snark and oddity. I'll read a bit about the characters, but great work!

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    Darkly: He is just scatting, because that's all he knows how to do.

    Chris: Glad you like it (right?). There will be more storyline in the chapters to come though; I promise. :3


    -PAGE EIGHT-
    -I ain't no scatman-


    -PAGE NINE-
    -Armeniwhat?
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    -PAGE TEN-
    Kill-who?
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    I feel like I'm either tripping my brains out or reading FLCL. (I'm told the effect is pretty much the same...) I've started laughing, though, because of total logical disconnect - my brains knows not what to do with these words and images!

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    mattbcl, FLCL sounds about right!

    -PAGE ELEVEN-
    Welcome back, now...
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    And now for the epic conclusion of Chapter One!

    -PAGE TWELVE-
    Denouement
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    -PAGE ONE-
    Chapter Two - Go!
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    -PAGE TWO-
    -We need to promote awareness of superheroes...-

    -Grey

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    Shocking update time!

    -PAGE THREE-
    Chupe: always sticking things in mud.
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    -PAGE FOUR-
    Six feet under...
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    Double page day!



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    Hehe, I've skimmed this a few times and think it's got quite a sharp illustration style and it cracks me up, even if it is completely quirky. Nice work bro, keep going with it!
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    It's really nice to hear feedback from people who aren't local friends of mine -- it gives a healthy perspective. I know it's a good, albeit hard to understand (at times), work. However, hearing praises from outsiders really gives me hope for it.

    I'll be sure to let the artists know. Meanwhile, it's time for a new page!

    -Grey

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    Time for another update!

    -Grey

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    Time for another double update!


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    Oh right, it's time for a dramatic reveal:

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