Poetry Corner

[Shadow Wolf]

Jajajaja, nice piece Houndy. It really made the impact on making the reference.

Well, here's another one that popped out of my mind an hour ago.

LLORPG

Struggling to start a new life; but joy doesn't stick in the heart...
Trying to trigger happiness, but good feelings are gone...
No one knows you're in pain, so no one can be of aid...
No options to select... the worst is thought of you...
One thing remaining... an unrequited love...
No hope is given; no second chance left...
No time to restore it right again...
Feelings burning up in the heart...
Tears now falling...flowing down...
Turn it off, take a break...
Control emotions...
Block suffering...
Power on...
Reset...
Heart...

On a side note: I wonder how many references to videogames I made on this one?

[Gavin Luper]

Jajajaja, nice piece Houndy. It really made the impact on making the reference.

Well, here's another one that popped out of my mind an hour ago.

LLORPG

Struggling to start a new life; but joy doesn't stick in the heart...
Trying to trigger happiness, but good feelings are gone...
No one knows you're in pain, so no one can be of aid...
No options to select... the worst is thought of you...
One thing remaining... an unrequited love...
No hope is given; no second chance left...
No time to restore it right again...
Feelings burning up in the heart...
Tears now falling...flowing down...
Turn it off, take a break...
Control emotions...
Block suffering...
Power on...
Reset...
Heart...

On a side note: I wonder how many references to videogames I made on this one?

Perhaps this is just an indication of the extent of my alcoholism, but I swear I see a martini glass. Is that shape intentional?

I loved the poem itself; the effect of each line becoming shorter and more breathless was, quite seriously, breathtaking. It's like life was slowly being squished out of the narrator, or they were falling asleep.