Okay, then it certainly works; for me, anyway.
That sounds like it must've been a very freaky dream indeed. I love having weird dreams that inspire me, but I find I never remember my dreams when I don't get enough sleep. It's like I need a good 7-8 hours sleep before I can have a really vivid dream. I'm sure there's a scientific reason behind it. And now I'm completely rambling ... my bad. ^_^Haven't read it either (haven't heard of it either lol). Believe it or not, the first chapter of Deathmatch is based off of the only part that I remember of the absolutely weirdest dream I think I've ever had, (and that's saying a lot). That and I play way too much TF2 these days.
et voila, new story
Keep it up, dude.
PS. What is this TF2 you speak of?